I also draw. Maybe I draw too much and write too little.
On the eve of his departure to Ponyville with Twilight, Spike was unexpectedly greeted with a talking ball of light.
The 'fae', as she introduced herself, basically declared the dragon to be her one and only master. The nonplussed dragon had no choice but to take her on.
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Pretty cool start.
Will be following this.
Hebidabedabibeder....
I was KYNDA hoping for a crossover...
But oh well.
Other than that, interesting story!
Put this on my tracking list.
7574392 Thank you!
7574403 Cheers! And heh, I would still do cross-overs in the future, one of them might be LoZ! Just that I have to think of an interesting way to mesh the two settings, or else it would just be bland IKEA cross-over (Insert Character A into Setting B).
But huh, IKEA cross-overs... This gives me a weird, weird idea.
I'm tracking this.
Sorry, who exactly is supposed to give a fuck?
Oh for god's sake, I just finished Ocarina of Time and that darn Navi STILL continues to pester me through people's stories! XD
7574506 Thanks!
7575244 The offending phrase would only be used sparingly, I promise
There was an episode of Powerpuff Girls where the Mayor was playing Zelda and accidentally killed Navi. For some fans, it was their favorite part of the episode.
I'm waiting for the eventual Navispam
No doubt, waiting for everyone's reactions too.
7576131 Aha, well, let's hope this little ol' dot of blue elicit something more than murderous rage, because I have some background planned for her, and it might get a lil' itty bitty heavy later on, depending on how things pan out.
Vague spoiler
She might not be as OC as you think!
7576193 Fortunate for every other's ears, even if she descended into spam, only Spike could hear them
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More if chapters if you would be so kind.
You had my interest.
Now you have my attention.
7578100 Chapter 3 is about done! But um... it's exhausted my manuscripts as well. Hopefully I can write quickly enough to replenish them!
7578234 Heh, cheers! I'll work hard try not to disappoint!
Okay, this is most definitely interesting. I'm curious about how it'll go and, though I'm almost certainly wrong, I have a hunch about Polytima and her animosity towards Twilight. I'm reminded of the words of a certain Time Long - "There's only one person in the universe who hates me that much." As I said, probably wrong, but an interesting thought.
However, I do have one request - please, please put the thoughtspeak between Spike and Poly in italics rather than quotation marks - that's the convention for that sort of thing and it would help me know when Spike's actually talking and when he isn't and get rid of the annoying impression that he's saying it all out loud, seemingly to thin air.
7620641 Haha, we'll see! I did give some hints several comments down, heh. (Ya mean Time Lord, right?
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And whelp, can't laze out of that one, it seems. I know about the convention about italicizing thoughts, sound effects and foreign speech, but I was typing on a phone sometimes, and it was a pain to format. Still, I will reapply the italics (heck, and reformat the whole story) an hour or so from now when I get near a computer, cheers!
7620741 And now you know why I don't write my own stories on here.
Lol, I'll read this in a bit but when i read the title i read it as Feo which is ugly in spanish... so my brain said "The dance of the..... ugly?...."
7709053 Aha, it does sound like 'La Danza de la Fea'. And it's not unbefitting in the thematic sense actually.
i get yandere vibe from this Polly and i love it, even if it was not intended
7709595 Heh, she has tinge of that, but she's also not entirely the knifing-all-mares-that-dare-to-approach-Spike kind of character... sort of, kinda, maybe. We'll see.
7709642 after reading the story this far i can see that this is not that kind of story yet, maybe?
anyway this is a good read, there is enough of details, nothing feels to be too forced and the story is peaking my interest with each new chapter, you are handling it splendidly, if there is anything that i could complain about, it would be that spike seems to be too forward too fast with polly, but i had that feeling only thru 2-3 first chapters and it wasn't anything major either.
like i said really good read, liked and added to the tracking list, can't wait for more : )
7709754 Thank you very much! :) If it helps, Spike's warm response towards her, at least in the beginning, was comparable to his affection towards Peewee. Though he certainly saw something extra, something oddly snug in her, that prompts his reaction from the beginning. I agree that he seems forward at times, but there is a reason of sorts to be expounded in future chapters.
7709586 so he dance ugly!
Polly defiantly seems to have other motives. Personally not really a fan of stories going back to episode 1 but this seems interesting so I'll see what happens in future chapters.
So reading the Springtime for a young Drake but why haven't you updated this story
This look interesting. I’m going to read some more until I manage to catch up.
Oh no. Another long hiatus with an indefinite date.
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Your story help inspire the story I'm writing. Thank you. I just wanted you to know.
Just read it and so far its amazing, i can't wait to see whats going to happen with spike and the fairy and what powers they are going to have.
Oh god. New chapter? I HAVE TO REREAD THIS AGAIN?!?
Jk! Cant wait to reread this again!
woooo!
Holy crap it’s alive
It's still alive?! *Goes back to reading*
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Glad to know! All the best to your own storywriting
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It's ALIVE!
Eeyup, obligatory apology for the long hiatus. I was off to pick up drawing ponies as a side interest, originally just wanting to have my very own story illustrations... it went a little bit out of hand.
The show's recent conclusion gave me a feeling of firmness and reason to come back. Out of the stories of mine, Dance of the Fae is one that I have a pretty solid idea about how it should go, and I shall go on till I am done. Glad to (still) have you on board!
Love the story so far!
You know, despite the small number of words, this story became one of my favorites (and I read quite a few of them). I'm a fan of Spike fics and when I read this incredibly cozy, kind and funny The story really made my soul feel good. I really hope that this and the rest of your stories will continue after such a long break. P.S. It’s a pity I can’t see what the picture was that you inserted in one of the parts when there was the first kiss...