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Yinglung


I also draw. Maybe I draw too much and write too little.

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A bit of distilled cider and his own appetite sent Spike's life in Ponyville into a spiral of chaos. Now faced with the consequences of his action, he tries to get out of the mess with the help of his new "friends".

Now with story illustrations!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

Wow, good start! I like it!

Pinkie let out a giggle, and then solemnly saluted. “Lieutenant Spinkie shall follow your orders, General Twilight Spike-kle!”

I loved this paragraph. I laughed so much at this!

7569131 Hey, cheers! I was trying to make the comedy tag at least not entirely inappropriate :twilightsheepish: Glad you like it!

>turns into applejack :applejackconfused:
>fucks given: 0 :ajsmug:

You can't get together with Applejack! Now the author will have to write her dialog all over the place in the rest of the story! :pinkiegasp:

7587170 I've been to Florida once, this entitles me, a Hong Kong Chinese who never met a Southerner in life, to butcher how people in the Appalachia talk.

No seriously though, first come does not necessarily means first serve. :trollestia:

P.S. As for new chapters for the three stories, I must inform with regret that I only have tangible manuscripts left for Shrinking Lavender, so it would probably be updated the most for now.

7587266
As someone who's written 393,817 words full of butchering a southern accent, I'm certainly not one to judge.

I always wandered what would happen if Spike ate the elements :unsuresweetie:

That got complicated really fast :applejackunsure:
But still good :pinkiesmile:

“I- I woke up in the boutique this morning. I was momentarily excited to be so close to my beloved Rarity. I… um…” Rarity’s face quickly reddened as she stuttered. “K- Kinda spent half the morning looking at myself in the mirror, almost forgetting to cook for Sweetie Belle.”

Can't really blame him: Rarity is hot.

I’m guessing that they in fact are the girls and have just had their minds injected with copies of spikes memories, personality, and sense of self, rather then being separate beings

I think it’s as simple them as them all being the original mane six, but with their minds being flooded with copies of spikes memories, thoughts, and personality. They’re all the same people as before, just was some extra stuff mixed in, and with the spike identity originally being the strongest one

If they waited 4 years for an update, why not me?

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