The Mare Who Fell from the Moon

Princess Luna falls from the sky to prevent a dragon from returning home. Before their impending battle, the two go for a walk, discovering more than one set path to their destination.

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great and powerful spike

great and powerful spike #1 · Aug 2nd, 2016 · · ·

That was a great story. Could you write a story about why Spike left and his time with the captain?

CaioCoia

CaioCoia #2 · Aug 2nd, 2016 · · ·

You did an amazing job man, that's a good fiction about Spike.

I love it the idea of Spike seeying all the intime parts, maybe because he is jealous or inocent, and the story of everyone getting mad and he is the only sane.

otaku-Drake

otaku-Drake #3 · Aug 2nd, 2016 · 2 · ·

I just love the devil may care attitude Spike has going on, don't know if that was intentional but still loved it.

also I'm not surprised Spike didn't want to stay in Equestria or be a hero, considering the fact the two ponies he saved still expected the worse from him just because he was a dragon, I mean who would want to be a hero to a bunch of creatures who would look down on you just because of what you are.

but the one thing I like the most is the interaction between Spike and luna, something about the two just seem to click with one another. even if I can't put my finger on what that something is.

SkyDragonMC