The Pony with a Crazy Mane who Lived in a Cabbin in the Woods

B sits in his red chair, a candle lit in the corner of his cabin, as a typewriter sits before him...

...and then he begins to write.

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AndromedaNova

AndromedaNova #1 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

Didn't read it yet, but the title is VERY excessive and kind of boring. I'd recommend altering it or changing it completely.

Just trying to offer constructive criticism :D

B_25

B_25 #2 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

7391146 Lola. I agree with you, though I'm going to keep it for personal sake.

FamousLastWords

FamousLastWords #3 · Jul 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

This story sucks in the best possible way.

B_25

B_25 #4 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

7391211 I Um Huh?

Steadfast Hoof

Steadfast Hoof #5 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

Why'd you use that picture?!

B_25

B_25 #6 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

7391412 Because you were the one that drew it.

Steadfast Hoof

Steadfast Hoof #7 · Jul 14th, 2016 · · ·

Plopping his hoofs against the keys, word after words was printed upon the sheet of paper, as the story was beginning to be told. B managed to smile as his cabin was sucked into a void resembling the universe, but his flow focused solely on the words before him.

argh, so many good quotes here! This is a story for the common man. Everyone gets here, but not many surpass this point! Time to start writing again!