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Spike had always caught my eye, but I wasn't expectin' for him to steal my heart. After his fight with Twilight, I thought bringin' him on the farm would help him, not harm us both with a good time. Though I wonder... can I get him to like me back?
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Drunk Applejack by xcopyen002
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Right as I'm about to go to bed, this gets uploaded. Guess I can spare 15 minutes. For you.
got bored into the night and wrote this.
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Thought it was very nice
Damn you, it's sweet.
Honestly I really REALLY enjoyed this story. It was great to read a story where Spike isn't drunk or bitter. This was a much more chill and relaxed Spike. I enjoyed watching the romance between him and AJ bloom. I kinda hope you do some more one shots like this of Spike pairing up with other females that we might night see the pairings often. Keep up the great work and I will always be here to enjoy your work as a fan.
cool i always love a good Applespike story
Sequel?? Please tell me that was left open for a sequel on purpose
Damn straight! It would have been awkwardly fun!
Fucking adorable
Daaawww this is soo Nice~
gay
Absolutely adorable. Few grammar errors here and there, but not enough to detract from my enjoyment of this piece.
Love the coverart.
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I got bored at night and read this.
You should get bored more often. Great story.
I just loved this story. It was super fluff and loved it.
You did a good job with both AJ's and Spike's characters. The interaction and reasons where both believeable.
I'm not sure what that means
You can get a free proofreader here
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Thanks for the saves, baby, though I ain't so sure there's a proof-reading willing to put up with my constant content and babbling bullshit.
nice story.
I'm usually not a fan of Sipke ships, I've never really read one that appealed to me.
Until today. That was surprisingly good! I'll be checking out some of your other stories later today
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I'm a member of the Proofreader Group & you are FAR from the worst I've helped.
I don't usually read:
EQ Girls
Horror
Romance &
Porn
Anything else, I'll happily read for you
This is good. This is more than good. The style of writing isn't something I'm used to but I was able to just sit down and enjoy it.
Opportunities > opposites.
Chef > chief.
...Sorry, what? That makes no sense, unfortunately.
I'm pretty sure it should be 'others' here.
Or > of.
Far away?
Drop the 'n' at the end.
Really sweet story here; definitely gonna add it to my library.
This was nice. A splendid way to end my day. Thank you.
Besides needing a good old polishing from an editor I really have no isusses with this story. It’s really good.
Really liked it, but the writing felt a little... drunk?
Sorry. I've been dying to make that joke. Good story!
Updated the chapter a tad. Nothing major; little fixes and omitting needless words.
Thanks again to Fanfic Reader for his help!
Okay so it’s two am and I haven’t slept at all/am also on a mobile device and will be rambling and stuff
So this was pretty solid
-there was delicious first person
-some 👌 shipping
-the voice for aj was good too and she sounded just right (god knows her voice is hard to get with the accent)
-the conflict was not fascinating or grand (duh) but this is a fine read for what it is
-I really need to get my high quality spike story fix somewhere
-is there some sort of spike romance a day going on?
-I liked that this is keeping with the trend of giving some good old romance over just shipping like with the Luna story
-Apple Bloom is two words
-the pairing was a solid pick
though obviously I’m gonna be on the lookout for far crazier ships w/ spike and just rarer stuff like with Luna-the flow was fine, but I feel it could have been stronger especially w/ how it connected to the emotions of the story
-god I am tired
Here’s your comment
Also wait isn’t this two stories in a row with someone being drunk/hey tipsy cover art horse?? Is that intentional?
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Thank you for the compliments and critique.
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No problem 👌
Another masterpiece... Fuck, this fic is good!
What a masterpiece! I wish there were more AJ & Spike stories like this!
Liked this, a lot. Have a fav.
Okay, but what the hell was her problem? I mean you sound like you're 18 and you don't get paid for being her assistant, not to mention you could get a good job as a mail-dragon since you just have to burn the letters. And on multiple occasions, you've cooked for her despite being treated like a pet or an annoyance, hell after all the years spent with her I'm not surprised he wants to move out.
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I can agree with this. It's important to remember, however, that these two have been friends for years and, well, Twilight might have gotten scared at losing all that so suddenly. We all are prone to knee-jerk reactions to things both sensitive and sudden happening simultaneously, aye?
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True, also 9.5/10 for the story but some mistakes in spelling here and there. Can't wait to see the next story!
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Thank you kindly for reading me. Please take good care of yourself.
OH MY GOSH THIS MADE ME CRY! So few solid representations for AppleSpike!
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I am a fan of your own applespikes. Your shakespony was enjoyable. Thanks for checking my stuff out!
Fantastic story.
What an adorable Applespike fic.
Not sure if you are still on bit any plans for writing that first time?
Wonderful story!
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Thanks!