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Flint Sparks


Who let the dogs out?

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Fluttershy, one of the most shy and kind ponies in all of Ponyville, is returning home from the spa as she passes through the marketplace. Applejack, known for her honest and hard-working demeanor, is out selling apples for the day. Neither expects today to be out of the ordinary.

As she leaves, Fluttershy's ears pick up a distressing sound. Is that a foal crying? A foal in distress is not something that can be ignored, and Ponyville's two virtuous ponies intend to help!


(Third Place Winner of the SFNW June Contest)

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Comments ( 20 )

A nice enjoyable, little slice of life. :scootangel:

Looovveee the ending!!!!!!!!! :yay:

He's a sneez-aport, have sneeze will travel. :rainbowlaugh:

Very cute feel good story. Sour things are the best things...

2794988 I couldn't help but laugh at that :rainbowlaugh:

Ya know, being a unicorn can be mega-helpful on an apple farm. Remember Twilight in Applebuck Season? She did the work of about twenty ponies with a single spell. That's pretty helpful when number of apples picked -> number of apples sold.

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exactly. Which is why Applejack is so supportive in this story, she's seen Twilight do it herself. :twilightsmile:

Very interesting and cute. There isn't much I could really do to this story, so I won't.

A funny thing in Equestria, every pony's name has significance to their life. Take RD for example. How did her parents know she was going to be fast? How did Fluttershy's parents know she was going to be shy? It's like they can predict the future!:rainbowderp:

2878176 I'm actually planning on writing a fic bout my idea of how that happens!

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one word: destiny :trollestia:

It's a cute story, so you've got my upvote. Although that bit about wanting him to "diverge information" should be corrected to "divulge".

2910605 I wonder if there's a fic for that here...

2924114 I corrected that mistake, thank you! :twilightsmile: and I'm glad you found it cute, I did my best! :derpytongue2:

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Oh you :rainbowkiss:

I did have one about a week ago and worried about my baby, but then I found out it was my own... :raritydespair:

2878176
FUCKING...
SCIENCE AND LOGIC.

:moustache: have a stache! You earned it:twilightsmile:

2878176 I blame Celestia. But now...-
STORY IDEA!

This tale was already in Twilight's Library, and it's worthy to be part of Tag-A-Long's Book Club as well.

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this was quite cute, it may have inspired me to continue my story, but I'm kinda running blank what to put in the prologue, I'd really like some help... but I dunno

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