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Moonlit Path


People are not born equal. That's the hard truth I learned at age four. But that was my first and last setback. -Midoriya Izuku

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Celestia explains the beginning of Equestria, from herself and Luna becoming alicorns, to having to banish Luna to the moon.

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Love it!!!

It's under my to review list. I will inform you once its done.:twilightsheepish:

This is a Twilight's Reviews review

Here is a grammar mistake I found:

After all, we were just two blank flank unicorn fillys.

"Fillys" is spelled as "fillies".

I must say, I was intrigued by the story by the way you wrote the long description. You put a lot of depth in Celestia's character and wrote her exactly the way she was meant to be. This story deserves a like, well done.

7551468 Thank you :pinkiesmile: It was a lot of fun to write.
Fixing that now :twilightsheepish:

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