People are not born equal. That's the hard truth I learned at age four. But that was my first and last setback. -Midoriya Izuku
The first chapter
During spring break, Sunset, her friends, and the CMC decide to go on vacation to the beach. However after Sunset has a small clothing malfunction during a surfing lesson with Rainbow Dash, she finds out something very important...NEVER wear a bikini when surfing.
The second chapter
After a day at the beach alone, Twilight and Sunset discover something they have been oblivious to since Twilight transferred to Canterlot High
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Not bad.
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Lies! We all know Sweetie calls herself SweetAI Belle on Fimfiction.
Also, this got weirdly meta, but in an interesting way.
Why is this story rated e?
7421803 Sorry, I thought I put it as T. Changing it now.
That was.. a very interesting read, specially the second chapter. And I am wondering what Rarity is reading, and what she is doing in private
the 4th wall breaking ruined the story
It was great give it (5/5)
Sweetie is one of us humble writers I see, eh?
i feel like this could've been a separate story to the first chapter. but i had fun, i liked it :3
This was a great start!
This was a great chapter! I'm kinda hoping for a sequel now.
delete 'couldn't'
hands
sounds
Ummmm?
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sing
Snerk...we implying Mac is a writer and this is the brand of pen he uses or something is pen sized?
And now to the next level where Gems Chick writes her own saucy tales.
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Thank you.
I fixed them. Also...
She looks like the daughter of Fluttershy and Twilight
You may have just given me an idea for another sequel.
7731340 It's supposed to be Bon-Bon, couldn't find a pic of Rars with a shotgun, This is next best thing I could find.
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7731391 Really... Bon Bon? I can see it, kind of.
Also, that's awesome
7731403 Picture is much more dramatic full size when you right click the link and open in new tab.
7731427 I did.
7731459 just checking
Twilight's
Also, pretty sure it's 'swimsuit'
Me: Did you lose your bikini bottom
Sunset: No Genius, I found a bikini top
Me: Well if you're done with your sarcasm I happened to have one that I found earlier. Could this be yours?
Sunset: Yeah it is thank you so much
Me: Hands over bottom Anytime. I'm uncomfortable, Bye
That I needed to get out of my system