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Why is art so precious? Because is beautiful, silly!
It makes you want to stare at it whenever you can. It can make you find feelings you didn’t know you could feel. Even if you can’t understand it, it’s comforting to have it close. Maybe that was the reason why Pinkie couldn’t stop painting that same face over and over again, it was the very definition of art!
A spiritual successor to: You Know You Want to
[Based on the Art of Friendship short]
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I enjoyed it. The latest movie made me think the same thing. While I normally primarily ship Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie when it comes to Equestria Girls I really like Pinkie with Sunset Shimmer.
8396565 I’m glad you did!
Yeah, Pinkie and Rainbow make a good pair, but they don’t seem to interact that much in the Equestria Girls world :T
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Not nearly as much as they do in the original show. Granted on the whole most of the characters have not gotten as much time as I feel they should.
Indaba yayinhle! Ngangikuthanda ukuthuthukiswa komlingiswa nendlela oshintshe ngayo phakathi kwezigcawu! Incazelo yakho yangenza ngijabule futhi ngithemba ukuthi wenza kahle! Qiniseka ukuthi awufaki i-sauce endaweni yokuhlanza!
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Well, someone made off with a lot of money that day. A sweet story, watching that short made me think of ShimmerPie shipping too.
Well done.
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I’m very glad you like it
A decent piece, I liked the bit with painting and cupcakes. You write it as a believable relationship, good job!
Your grasp of the characters is pretty amazing. And the logical conclusion from what is presented in the short is brought forth. Especially when we also consider Sunset's Backstage Pass.
That said, there are lots of grammar and syntax errors. A once over with a good editor would help with that. Lord knows I need a good editor to look at my stuff.
I read this and You Know You Want To and its very clear that your story instincts are good. If you ever get the inkling to write another story, let me know when you're ready for editing. I'll be happy to help