Wallflower has a crush on Sunset. No one knows this... except Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. Rainbow and Fluttershy then show how to go about this crush, but will that be enough to help win Sunset's heart?
Sunflower and Flutterdash
Forgotten Friendship never happened in this universe
What? No envious glances anywhere? XD
So in Equestria Girls' alternate universe, being kissed turns someone into a concept?
This was a decent fic.
Keep up the good work. :)
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Whoops. Lol. Now i feel dumb. But thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it considering I have no experience in writing stories
Y E S ! My favorite ship! Insta-fav! Keep up the good work pal!
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Thanks I really appreciate it!
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It's okay, I'm still kinda new too.
AH! So cute! Love this, thumbs up.
Good Job making this mate! Love your first story and yeah writing really isn't easy because ideas but keep up the good work
After school ended, Sunset had waited outside of school to see who her secret admirer could be.
Sunset chuckled “Well see you in class!” She said before kissing Wallflower on the blushing cheek.
“Y-yea, s-see you, after class.” Said Wallflower in a somewhat dreamy tone.
Why end it with in/after class when the school day had just ended?
Pretty much what bothers me the most. I like the plot, though.
This was cute.