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TheKing2001


Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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At a sleep over with her fellow Rainbooms, Pinkie decides to tell Sunset her feelings. She has absolutely no idea if Sunset will reciprocate or not, but she's gonna find out.

Takes place after Sunsets Backstage Pass(I think that's the name, been a while since I watched it.)

Submitted as an entry for the EQG Anniversary Spring Fling Contest

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Comments ( 11 )

Is this a submission for the EQG Anniversary Spring Fling Contest?

11559317
No. I didn't even know that was a thing

11559377
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1010077/the-eqg-anniversary-spring-fling-contest

Your story basically fits the criteria. Maybe you should consider submitting it? You could earn some money out of it.

11559403
Oh interesting. I'll do that, thank you for letting me know

You need to alter the long description of your story to state that you are submitting this story as an entry into the contest. Otherwise the judges won't even consider your story. Please go over the rules a bit more closely.

11559552
Ah thank you. My shift at work started right when I read your comment

Sunset and Pinkie is a woefully underexplored relationship, especially considering the chemistry they have in Sunset’s Backstage Pass, so I was happy to see a SunPie story in the contest. And this is a decently fluffy little bit of it, with a fairly classic premise (the love confession). It does have some problems with character voicing, though, as a lot of lines don’t have much intonation and read flatly at times. Also, I’m not sure if this was simply meant to be an in-joke about Hasbro, but Battleship feels like a weird choice of movie for the Rainbooms, even Rainbow Dash. Regardless, it was nice to have a dose of this pairing, so thank you for the submission.

11589331
I'm very glad you liked it. I agreed, Sunpie is my favorite ship for the Sunset now. I actually finished watching Battleship the night I wrote this lmao so that's why it's the movie I picked for the story. And anytime, glad to have taken part of it

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