The setting will take first place at Wonderbolt Headquarters. All of the Wonderbolts were about to have a vacation until, Spitfire changed some plans. King Sombra comes back and some pony brought him back! Princess Celestia gets a letter from him and is really unhappy to see him. The Mane 6 have to stop King Sombra but, in order to do so, they need Rainbow Dash. The element of loyalty is gone and also, the Wonderbolts. King Sombra is making a plan to take over the Crystal Empire. With Shadowbolts helping him, will the plan work? Who let out King Sombra? Will Princess Celestia beat him? Where could Rainbow Dash be? Where are the rest of the Wonderbolts? Will there be a war? Is any pony going to be safe again?
Read this story to find out
Anyways, enjoy reading this!
The premise sounds interesting. Tracking this because curiosity
This reminds me of an idea I have for a side story of King Sombra's Prince with the Crystal War, I like where this is going.
No offense mate but i think you should remove the warning because it drives away readers.
Okay RoseTheChangeling
Wow great chapter
cant wait for the next chapter
I wanted to make this chapter longer but, I am really busy and at least this chapter has more words than Chapter 1
Great Chapter
Soarindash 4life
Awwwwww sooooo cute :3 SoarinDash Forever
Dashie217 thank you
Super fast, but I guess... *shrugs* also, you could use an editor, just a recommendation.
Could use some spelling and sentence checks but other than that, its pretty good.
I'm very interested in this, and it's great for your first story! Just in a couple spots, I would have worded it better, but despite that, great job!!!
I'm fangirled get hard right now, I haven't read it yet, the chapter name says it all!
Look at that typo, look at it!
Edit: I've read it, loved it, and can't wait for more!
U read high winds?! SAME also great story!!!