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TheOneWithoutAName


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A cuckold story eh? Seems interesting. I will follow this with great interest.

No way i can get past one of this stories^^

you do realize of course that with that set up you now owe us an octascratch story, don’t you?

how could you cheat on flash twilight?

she should just fly to flash sentry.

Hell yes. I am excited for this.

7401825 Yeah, it would have been better.

F: Hey, Twilight! Sorry if I'm late. How are yo-
T: Flash. Bed. Sex. Now.
F: Yes ma'am!
2 hours later
F: Ouch, my pelvis. Maybe I should visit you more often. Or apply for transfer.

7402045 Cuckold is a fetish I actually only dabble in, but it's carved out a niche as a guilty pleasure. Mind you I prefer the version of it where a loving couple is simply seeking to spice up their sex life, but I don't shy away from the inherent thriller aspect of out and out cheating.

I actually like this story better than The Pink Circle, which also features cheating. What really sets the two apart are their depictions of the respective bulls in the equation.

Pink Circle's protagonist Klein is a misogynist, openly espousing a belief that women are nothing more than living, breathing sex toys, and cares nothing for them beyond getting off. Even his apparent friendship with Gilda, an open lesbian, is all part of a plan that ultimately gets him into her pants. What makes that story hard for me to read is Klein being a misogynist. As a man with a progressive mindset who adores women that defy the Stay In The Kitchen trope, (ex Erza Scarlet), misogynists have a tendency to chap my ass something fierce.

By contrast, Cheating Twilight's depiction of Thunderlane is of a man who respects women and has genuine friendships with them, playboy tendencies notwithstanding. It's clear that he's not actively trying to steal Twilight from Flash. He genuinely sees it as doing his bestie a solid by making sure his girl can relieve her pent up libido. And that's an interesting mindset to me, a very white/black feel to it. He's helping his friend, but also getting something out of it for himself.

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I kind of feared that! :rainbowlaugh: I will have to see where I can bring them in.

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That would kind of defeat the purpose of a cheating clopfic, not to mention that Twilight can't just dump her royal duties to go fly over to the Crystal Empire to fuck Flash Sentry. Even if I will admit that this is a funny excuse to escape said duties! :rainbowlaugh:

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Well, you view him in a more positive light than I actually depicted him. :derpyderp1: It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way.

Just thought I mentioned it here, not that you are disappointed by the outcome! :twilightsheepish:

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It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way

Netorare, huh? Well...that turned me away. To each their own.

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Glad you see it like that. It's not something for everyone. Also thanks for bringing that term up. I will note it down under 'Contains', so that people know what to expect and not to stumble blindly into a story they don't like the theme of! :yay:

7402678 Like I said, the only thing keeping me from liking The Pink Circle more is that its protagonist is an unrepentant misogynist. I don't hate netorare. It's a guilty pleasure for me. I will follow this story with great interest.

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Well, you view him in a more positive light than I actually depicted him. :derpyderp1: It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way.

Well, it's not like after Thunderlane turned Twi into a submissive slut who won't object to pretty much anything, Flash Sentry could go out and find another girl who desperately wants to outdo Princess Twilight to the point where just the idea of taking something from her will have her begging for Flash's D...
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Dammit, Trixie, you're being very inconvenient right now!

Honestly, loving this story so far, but now I want to read a longer story about Futa Vinyl slutifying Octavia.

getting a name drop, huh? well now i'm kinda obligated to comment, no? well i have to say i'm pleased, even though it IS a bit short. also, while reading this, i was somewhat expecting cloudchaser and/or flitter instead of vinyl and octavia, since they are usually the go to pairing for thunderlande (or rumble), but i can't say i mind it like this. i'm always open for new things :pinkiehappy:

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BRAD DOESNT EVEN DESERVE TO LIVE!!!!!!! TWIDASH FOR EVER!!!!!!!!!

It would be nice to see a chapter where Thunderlane is training Twilight and have Spike catch them. Instead of telling her she's awful for cheating on Flash he'll join in and help Thunderlane pound her good as thank you for his 'advices' to win Rarity over.

Thunderlane is no friend of flash any more. he going to die very soon. twilight going be on front paper as first princess to cheating. or label as ---.

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Damn good, or damn bad? :pinkiesmile:

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I agree on that one! That would definitely be hot too! :rainbowkiss:

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Huh. Seems like I have to work on that. I mean, I was trying to make it shorter, kind of exercising, since someone said that the first chapter of Apple Orchards was too lengthy. I will go over the chapter another time and see if I can squeeze a paragraph or two in. Also glad you liked it! :yay:

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Spike has not a role assigned as of now, but Spike being a bro to Thunderlane certainly seems interesting. It all really depends if it fits in at the moment. So I'm thinking about it. :pinkiesmile:

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It's not that I'm not happy that I have readers, but... if you really don't like cheating (Netorare) then maybe you shouldn't read it. It only gets worse for Flash in the future chapters, believe me. That was also the reason I set up a warning in the Author's Notes in the first chapter. This topic just isn't for everyone.

That.... was kinda silly.
Though that could actually be a good thing.

You know, I can't help the feeling that this story would end with a threesome.

This is incredible. Keep it going.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep the story go

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I will continue. I'm just not happy with what I had planned for the chapter. Or how I was writing it. I might have more time on my hands. Can't say though how I will work things out. I still have Apple Orchards which needs an update too. So, no promises on when I will make this here.

Please add more, I really love this story.

About damn time! I've been chomping at the bit!

I do legitimately hope that Flash gets some kind of pay back in the end or something. God knows the poor bastard gets enough shit thrown at him as it is.

i wonder if Twilight got pregnant with Thunderlane's baby yet

Oh s*** thunderlane fd up 1st off flash is a guard who knows shining armor 2nd shining will fn destroy thunderlane when flash tells him thunderlane turned his sister into a cheating sl*t. Only question is will flash in a fit of rage let everyone know twilight been cheating on him ....loyalty honesty wont stand for that.... maybe even kindness and laughter will be disappointed she hurt someone. Oooooooh cant wait to see what happens. Maybe he will be willing to share for all we know since she's s*x starved now... guys can be strange when it comes to s*x. But I'm hoping she has flashes kid.

Nice!
I especially like the moral degeneration Twilight is undergoing. Cannot wait to see, what Flashs reaction will be and how much Thunderlane will fuck her up.

EDIT: Yes in the literal and figurative sense.

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Love the sex scene and all but i hate the idea of cheating, i am hoping she loses her friends due to it and thunder-lane gets his teeth smashed in.

Wait, how did thunderlane came inside her womb while facefucking?

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Just got the wrong word, as I meant the stomach. Corrected it already. So thanks for mentioning it. :twilightsheepish:

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Yeah. Took a bit. I plan to have the next chapter out sooner than this one. :twilightsheepish:

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I honestly don't like to give you some bad news but this is a Netorare story like mentioned in the description. And such a story normally doesn't entail a happy end for the one who was cheated. I really have nothing against Flash. I just found the topic fascinating and the Requester pretty much helped develop ideas for this along. Of course it makes me wonder now if I should make an alternate ending too to the one that is planned. This isn't after all the first time people reacted towards this story this way. Heck, maybe something along the lines of Flash getting a potion from Zecora to enlarge his cock and Thunderlane together with Flash rut Twilight together.

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Nah it's your story so it's your rules .... I just reallllllly hate thunderlane to many stories of him getting off scott free is all ... flash has a few like that but for some reason thunderlane has like a 100?? It feels like.

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Yer knew it was gonna be like that, but i'll still keep readin cause of the *cough* interesting scenes.

For the love of NightmareMoon, please let Flash catch them. He is such an underminded and degraded character that needs a hot spot in the movie.

I want nothing more than a desperate and heart-broken Twilight trying to win him back.

With that Thunderlane stood gently up with Twilight, before giving her a quick peck and moving to the kitchen.

I think Thunderlane should be Flash instead.

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Wouldn't mind seeing thunder-lane get his throat cut either.

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Ok i wasn't the only one who caught that.

I have a feeling this story is gonna take a dark tune were Twilight gonna either manipulate the situation ...or not.

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