Twilight is in need of her stallion. Unluckily for her, her coltfriend Flash is away. Luckily for her, his friend Thunderlane is ready to fill in for that position. In more ways than one.
This is a Netorare story. So it kind of is not such a great thing for Flash. I guess I said it last chapter, and even before that, but Netorare isn't something that normally turns out too well for the character that is cheated. And I most definitely will not use violence against Thunderlane. There is no gore tag for a reason. But yeah, the ending is planned out and you guys probably won't like it. Of course, like I offered last chapter I also could write an alternate ending with a threesome between with Thunderlane, Twilight and Flash. Just thought I could mention it again, seeing as every chapter I seem to have such comments that wish for the Netorare story to go in a different reaction.
I did warn about it repeatedly. And if you don't like it, that's okay. It just makes me wonder how you didn't notice it until now. It also makes me wonder if I should use even more warnings, but then again I have a warning at the first chapter in the Author's Notes.
I just underlined the warning there now. Just to make sure people definitely know what they are in for. This should make it easier.
Ah, okay. This does make sense. Netorare might be an okay concept as a fetish fantasy, but not in real life of course. I just hope that the warning about this topic will reach other readers before they indulge themselves too much into this story.
This story is one of my favorites, can't wait for new chapters! P.s. It'd be wonderful if you also wrote about "spike fucking his own princess slut", bonus chapter maybe? Sry for bad eng
There won't be a bonus chapter like that because of a reason that you might actually enjoy. The reason that, let's say Spike...does get an appearance in one of the promised canon chapters. Just like three other characters!
It'd be cool if twilight gave thunderlane some kind of magical voodoo fleshlight so he can fuck even in plain sight or smith, but I'm sure you got something a lot more kinky and awesome stored than that :p
Thanks. I really needed to hear someone say that. I mean after hearing complaints about Thunderlane quite recently and in many chapters it is good to hear that there are some people who say that I should go with what I have planned and want to do. So thanks!
For the love of NightmareMoon, please let Flash catch them. He is such an underminded and degraded character that needs a hot spot in the movie.
I want nothing more than a desperate and heart-broken Twilight trying to win him back.
I think Thunderlane should be Flash instead.
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Wouldn't mind seeing thunder-lane get his throat cut either.
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PLEASE!!!!
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Ok i wasn't the only one who caught that.
I have a feeling this story is gonna take a dark tune were Twilight gonna either manipulate the situation ...or not.
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This is a Netorare story. So it kind of is not such a great thing for Flash. I guess I said it last chapter, and even before that, but Netorare isn't something that normally turns out too well for the character that is cheated. And I most definitely will not use violence against Thunderlane. There is no gore tag for a reason. But yeah, the ending is planned out and you guys probably won't like it. Of course, like I offered last chapter I also could write an alternate ending with a threesome between with Thunderlane, Twilight and Flash. Just thought I could mention it again, seeing as every chapter I seem to have such comments that wish for the Netorare story to go in a different reaction.
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Oh. Well I'm out then. Bye.
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I did warn about it repeatedly. And if you don't like it, that's okay. It just makes me wonder how you didn't notice it until now. It also makes me wonder if I should use even more warnings, but then again I have a warning at the first chapter in the Author's Notes.
I just underlined the warning there now. Just to make sure people definitely know what they are in for. This should make it easier.
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Nothing against you, but I have experienced such a thing and it did a number on me with my first fiance`.
You go about with the ending you desire, but I will have to avoid it for those personal reasons.
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Ah, okay. This does make sense. Netorare might be an okay concept as a fetish fantasy, but not in real life of course. I just hope that the warning about this topic will reach other readers before they indulge themselves too much into this story.
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Eh, we can still imagine. But yes an alternate ending would be greatly appreciated. Though ya don't have to do it if ya don't want to.
This story is one of my favorites, can't wait for new chapters!
P.s. It'd be wonderful if you also wrote about "spike fucking his own princess slut", bonus chapter maybe?
Sry for bad eng
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There won't be a bonus chapter like that because of a reason that you might actually enjoy. The reason that, let's say Spike...does get an appearance in one of the promised canon chapters. Just like three other characters!
It'd be cool if twilight gave thunderlane some kind of magical voodoo fleshlight so he can fuck even in plain sight or smith, but I'm sure you got something a lot more kinky and awesome stored than that :p
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+1
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Know that hentai movie! Though it will be easier, considering Flash will be too close during the game.
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Thanks. I really needed to hear someone say that. I mean after hearing complaints about Thunderlane quite recently and in many chapters it is good to hear that there are some people who say that I should go with what I have planned and want to do. So thanks!
Wow this story is liking me and like your other stories, I want to read the next chapter ... that Twilight is a first class whore
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Thunderlane is a gentlecolt too