Twilight is in need of her stallion. Unluckily for her, her coltfriend Flash is away. Luckily for her, his friend Thunderlane is ready to fill in for that position. In more ways than one.
Hymn.... maybe he's a changeling maybe even chrysalis trying to ruin twilight. It'd be interesting if they got caught by flash coming outta the bathroom together. Imagine the fallout in the middle of a ballpark with 1000s of people discovering one of the princesses is a cheating slut. That would be front page news and ruin her thats why i think he's a changelling.
Will this have multiple endings or is it a commissioned work with a set ending. I hate the flash sentry character personally. I'm more a RD x Twi and now a Tempest x Twi fan. He was a background character in the movie they really needed to fill out more for serious consideration. But I hate cheaters more I don't want her to get either thunderlane or flash I hope when he finds out flash leaves her then when thunderlane gets bored and the varnish of fuc**ng a princess wears off he leaves her for his next conquest alone and pregnant with no one to support her because she's a cheating sl*t. With all her friends disappointed she'd hurt someone like that. She pretty much alienated loyalty honesty kindness laughter right off the bat by cheating and hurting another. Rarity would be a tough call but she'd go with the majority so as not to be a outsider.Maybe hook flash up with AJ or fluttershy ...or both.*hint hint wink wink* The princesses and Cadence I could see being sympathetic having the same urges but their also the most likely be less forgiving because they have those same urges they don't submit to. Especially cadence she pretty much will destroy flashes love all for some sex. I see shining siding with flash just because of how he'd feel if his love for cadence was destroyed like that. But twilight must suffer.
Honestly that would be quite dark. Or well, at least in a direction that makes it not really a 'Good Ending' in any way. Though one might not really use that word for how this story will end. I was thinking about doing an Ending with Flash and Thunderlane teaming up on Twi as Alternative Ending, but I won't really promise anything. People told me to end this the way I see fit and not to always worry. It is a good advice. So, I stay with a classic Netorare Ending in a way, which might not be your cup of tea. But like I mentioned, I try not to worry about such things anymore. It is tagged a Netorare story. The ending might not please you. Just as a fair warning at this point.
Glad to hear it. I hope you guys will enjoy the ride until the end. I think we have four more chapters to go, or three. All depending what content I put in what chapter. Next one will certainly be interesting though!
8551208 Nah no biggie it's your story and you did say in the beginning to expect a bad end. I just like it when cheaters suffer they don't deserve a happy endings.
8603586 I wasn't disagreeing with that last point. Just that cheating fetishism isn't possible if both parties are okay with it. Getting off on your partner cheating on you by sex with other people in front of you is a thing. It might not be as hardcore as what you're going for but it is possible.
She is too out of her mind to feel pride. She only feels the massive cock hammering her soon-to-be loose hole.
Indeed and so her thoughts would be really simple. She would still have some capability of thought at that point. Very basic thought but thought nonetheless. Right now it goes from sober to completely gone a little too quickly. There should be a period inbetween where she is still thinking coherently but is overtaken by lust.
They are. Alley sex, sex toys and stuff like that.
I meant that Twilight would do it. Finding very inventive and ingenious ways to have sex. She would also have notes around. As much as she enjoys being a slut Twilight is still Twilight and I don't see her trying to aggressive suppress that part of her. After all if Thunderlane can't break her mind anymore she's done with him.
I am actually trying to give myself a push as I really want to wrap it up. It is just hard to start writing again on an old story. Hopefully I manage to get into it this weekend, so I can finally move things forward.
I started up on this again not too long ago. I will only publish it once I have every chapter ready. Might not manage to finish it this year, but it isn't forgotten.
Fair enough. I actually wanted to wait publishing the new chapter until I have all of the other chapters ready, but I will go for publishing it at the end of the week.
Oh neat, this is back.
Hymn.... maybe he's a changeling maybe even chrysalis trying to ruin twilight. It'd be interesting if they got caught by flash coming outta the bathroom together. Imagine the fallout in the middle of a ballpark with 1000s of people discovering one of the princesses is a cheating slut. That would be front page news and ruin her thats why i think he's a changelling.
Will this have multiple endings or is it a commissioned work with a set ending. I hate the flash sentry character personally. I'm more a RD x Twi and now a Tempest x Twi fan. He was a background character in the movie they really needed to fill out more for serious consideration. But I hate cheaters more I don't want her to get either thunderlane or flash I hope when he finds out flash leaves her then when thunderlane gets bored and the varnish of fuc**ng a princess wears off he leaves her for his next conquest alone and pregnant with no one to support her because she's a cheating sl*t. With all her friends disappointed she'd hurt someone like that. She pretty much alienated loyalty honesty kindness laughter right off the bat by cheating and hurting another. Rarity would be a tough call but she'd go with the majority so as not to be a outsider.Maybe hook flash up with AJ or fluttershy ...or both.*hint hint wink wink* The princesses and Cadence I could see being sympathetic having the same urges but their also the most likely be less forgiving because they have those same urges they don't submit to. Especially cadence she pretty much will destroy flashes love all for some sex. I see shining siding with flash just because of how he'd feel if his love for cadence was destroyed like that. But twilight must suffer.
Awesome job!
Give me more of this, it's amazing I love it.
Oh boy, next chapter Twilight gets to be the halftime entertainment in the locker room.
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Honestly that would be quite dark. Or well, at least in a direction that makes it not really a 'Good Ending' in any way. Though one might not really use that word for how this story will end. I was thinking about doing an Ending with Flash and Thunderlane teaming up on Twi as Alternative Ending, but I won't really promise anything. People told me to end this the way I see fit and not to always worry. It is a good advice. So, I stay with a classic Netorare Ending in a way, which might not be your cup of tea. But like I mentioned, I try not to worry about such things anymore. It is tagged a Netorare story. The ending might not please you. Just as a fair warning at this point.
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Glad to hear it. I hope you guys will enjoy the ride until the end. I think we have four more chapters to go, or three. All depending what content I put in what chapter. Next one will certainly be interesting though!
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Nah no biggie it's your story and you did say in the beginning to expect a bad end. I just like it when cheaters suffer they don't deserve a happy endings.
One thing that this story could use would be descriptions of how THICC twilight is, especially compared to her friends.
My take is that her alicorn transformation overdeveloped her body and with it her sensitivity.
With tits that big and and ass that wide, it's no wonder Twilight became a slut.
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I think I mentioned her breasts being E-Cups at the beginning.
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true, but sometimes it's worth reminding the reader how much is jiggling about ;)
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I wasn't disagreeing with that last point. Just that cheating fetishism isn't possible if both parties are okay with it. Getting off on your partner cheating on you by sex with other people in front of you is a thing. It might not be as hardcore as what you're going for but it is possible.
Man I can't wait for the update!
wait why this in Cross-Species Smut Group under Dragons and Female?
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Who knows? Foreshadowing for a future event?
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I've lost all hope for spike x ember in this story, but maybe one day... FeelsOkayMan
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I'm working on my Bachelor currently, so...not so great here. Honestly, I haven't made progress on my Commissions either.
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She is too out of her mind to feel pride. She only feels the massive cock hammering her soon-to-be loose hole.
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They are. Alley sex, sex toys and stuff like that.
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Indeed and so her thoughts would be really simple. She would still have some capability of thought at that point. Very basic thought but thought nonetheless. Right now it goes from sober to completely gone a little too quickly. There should be a period inbetween where she is still thinking coherently but is overtaken by lust.
I meant that Twilight would do it. Finding very inventive and ingenious ways to have sex. She would also have notes around. As much as she enjoys being a slut Twilight is still Twilight and I don't see her trying to aggressive suppress that part of her. After all if Thunderlane can't break her mind anymore she's done with him.
Dead story is dead.
the story is not followed (I love it) but I think the reward is a gangbang?
i take a guess that she will meet some of the hoofbal players, backstage, so to speak :P
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And I can't even imagine why. It feels like there is only roughly three more chapters worth to this story at the most.
Very cool story, i like the TwiLane ship but it's bad there never had ending !
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I can read what I what. I just personal hate how twilight portrait in this fic, as a cheat bit--.
so I love to see thunderlane gut up.
It's a shame this story never got finished.
Is this gonna get updated? It's been over three years.
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I am actually trying to give myself a push as I really want to wrap it up. It is just hard to start writing again on an old story. Hopefully I manage to get into it this weekend, so I can finally move things forward.
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Don't speed your end, take your time if you need, but i garanted you will do of me a happy viewer if you can finish this ^^
this really was a good story, but i think it's time for me to move on. it's dead jim.
I need this story finished so badly. I think it needs a good long visit to Dr. Frankenstein.
It’s been at least a couple of years now, when the new update? Or this cancelled forever?
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I started up on this again not too long ago. I will only publish it once I have every chapter ready. Might not manage to finish it this year, but it isn't forgotten.
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can't believe i'm still holding out for a new chapter.
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Fair enough. I actually wanted to wait publishing the new chapter until I have all of the other chapters ready, but I will go for publishing it at the end of the week.