Twilight is in need of her stallion. Unluckily for her, her coltfriend Flash is away. Luckily for her, his friend Thunderlane is ready to fill in for that position. In more ways than one.
F: Hey, Twilight! Sorry if I'm late. How are yo- T: Flash. Bed. Sex. Now. F: Yes ma'am! 2 hours later F: Ouch, my pelvis. Maybe I should visit you more often. Or apply for transfer.
7402045 Cuckold is a fetish I actually only dabble in, but it's carved out a niche as a guilty pleasure. Mind you I prefer the version of it where a loving couple is simply seeking to spice up their sex life, but I don't shy away from the inherent thriller aspect of out and out cheating.
I actually like this story better than The Pink Circle, which also features cheating. What really sets the two apart are their depictions of the respective bulls in the equation.
Pink Circle's protagonist Klein is a misogynist, openly espousing a belief that women are nothing more than living, breathing sex toys, and cares nothing for them beyond getting off. Even his apparent friendship with Gilda, an open lesbian, is all part of a plan that ultimately gets him into her pants. What makes that story hard for me to read is Klein being a misogynist. As a man with a progressive mindset who adores women that defy the Stay In The Kitchen trope, (ex Erza Scarlet), misogynists have a tendency to chap my ass something fierce.
By contrast, Cheating Twilight's depiction of Thunderlane is of a man who respects women and has genuine friendships with them, playboy tendencies notwithstanding. It's clear that he's not actively trying to steal Twilight from Flash. He genuinely sees it as doing his bestie a solid by making sure his girl can relieve her pent up libido. And that's an interesting mindset to me, a very white/black feel to it. He's helping his friend, but also getting something out of it for himself.
That would kind of defeat the purpose of a cheating clopfic, not to mention that Twilight can't just dump her royal duties to go fly over to the Crystal Empire to fuck Flash Sentry. Even if I will admit that this is a funny excuse to escape said duties!
Well, you view him in a more positive light than I actually depicted him. It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way.
Just thought I mentioned it here, not that you are disappointed by the outcome!
It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way
Netorare, huh? Well...that turned me away. To each their own.
Glad you see it like that. It's not something for everyone. Also thanks for bringing that term up. I will note it down under 'Contains', so that people know what to expect and not to stumble blindly into a story they don't like the theme of!
7402678 Like I said, the only thing keeping me from liking The Pink Circle more is that its protagonist is an unrepentant misogynist. I don't hate netorare. It's a guilty pleasure for me. I will follow this story with great interest.
Well, you view him in a more positive light than I actually depicted him. It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way.
That would kind of defeat the purpose of a cheating clopfic.
Not necessarily, I'd give an example like Kashinpanda's comics and art. Several of their comics have characters particularly relishing in the act of cheating like, Cadence getting it on with Nightlight while Shining is doing Velvet. Or Chyrisalis taking Velvet's body and getting Flash to fertilize the Changling eggs inside her before impregnating Flash with them. Most of it is just swinging but a few of them are vocally cheating fetishism like "you're knocking your son's wife up right now"
Honestly even then it would be closer to swinging. I mean they know about it and are okay with it in the end. At least maybe besides the Flash example. And it doesn't really corrects my point which was that if Twilight just flies to Flash for some fucking, instead of doing it with Thunderlane, then there is no cheating involved.
Easy the best clopfic i read in Fimfiction. TwiLane are not the ship in this story, but i very like their relation here. And also Flash is boring, so it's another good point for me.
A cuckold story eh? Seems interesting. I will follow this with great interest.
No way i can get past one of this stories^^
damn
you do realize of course that with that set up you now owe us an octascratch story, don’t you?
how could you cheat on flash twilight?
she should just fly to flash sentry.
Hell yes. I am excited for this.
7401825 Yeah, it would have been better.
7402045 Cuckold is a fetish I actually only dabble in, but it's carved out a niche as a guilty pleasure. Mind you I prefer the version of it where a loving couple is simply seeking to spice up their sex life, but I don't shy away from the inherent thriller aspect of out and out cheating.
I actually like this story better than The Pink Circle, which also features cheating. What really sets the two apart are their depictions of the respective bulls in the equation.
Pink Circle's protagonist Klein is a misogynist, openly espousing a belief that women are nothing more than living, breathing sex toys, and cares nothing for them beyond getting off. Even his apparent friendship with Gilda, an open lesbian, is all part of a plan that ultimately gets him into her pants. What makes that story hard for me to read is Klein being a misogynist. As a man with a progressive mindset who adores women that defy the Stay In The Kitchen trope, (ex Erza Scarlet), misogynists have a tendency to chap my ass something fierce.
By contrast, Cheating Twilight's depiction of Thunderlane is of a man who respects women and has genuine friendships with them, playboy tendencies notwithstanding. It's clear that he's not actively trying to steal Twilight from Flash. He genuinely sees it as doing his bestie a solid by making sure his girl can relieve her pent up libido. And that's an interesting mindset to me, a very white/black feel to it. He's helping his friend, but also getting something out of it for himself.
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I kind of feared that! I will have to see where I can bring them in.
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That would kind of defeat the purpose of a cheating clopfic, not to mention that Twilight can't just dump her royal duties to go fly over to the Crystal Empire to fuck Flash Sentry. Even if I will admit that this is a funny excuse to escape said duties!
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Well, you view him in a more positive light than I actually depicted him. It is a cheating clopfic where Flash Sentry is not having a Good Ending after all. Thunderlane will turn Twilight into a complete pervert and abuse her sex drive in a way.
Just thought I mentioned it here, not that you are disappointed by the outcome!
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Netorare, huh? Well...that turned me away. To each their own.
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Glad you see it like that. It's not something for everyone. Also thanks for bringing that term up. I will note it down under 'Contains', so that people know what to expect and not to stumble blindly into a story they don't like the theme of!
7402678 Like I said, the only thing keeping me from liking The Pink Circle more is that its protagonist is an unrepentant misogynist. I don't hate netorare. It's a guilty pleasure for me. I will follow this story with great interest.
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Well, it's not like after Thunderlane turned Twi into a submissive slut who won't object to pretty much anything, Flash Sentry could go out and find another girl who desperately wants to outdo Princess Twilight to the point where just the idea of taking something from her will have her begging for Flash's D...
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Dammit, Trixie, you're being very inconvenient right now!
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Not necessarily, I'd give an example like Kashinpanda's comics and art. Several of their comics have characters particularly relishing in the act of cheating like, Cadence getting it on with Nightlight while Shining is doing Velvet. Or Chyrisalis taking Velvet's body and getting Flash to fertilize the Changling eggs inside her before impregnating Flash with them. Most of it is just swinging but a few of them are vocally cheating fetishism like "you're knocking your son's wife up right now"
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Honestly even then it would be closer to swinging. I mean they know about it and are okay with it in the end. At least maybe besides the Flash example. And it doesn't really corrects my point which was that if Twilight just flies to Flash for some fucking, instead of doing it with Thunderlane, then there is no cheating involved.
Gonna grab me a shotgun!!!😡
Easy the best clopfic i read in Fimfiction.
TwiLane are not the ship in this story, but i very like their relation here.
And also Flash is boring, so it's another good point for me.