Twilight is in need of her stallion. Unluckily for her, her coltfriend Flash is away. Luckily for her, his friend Thunderlane is ready to fill in for that position. In more ways than one.
I do legitimately hope that Flash gets some kind of pay back in the end or something. God knows the poor bastard gets enough shit thrown at him as it is.
Oh s*** thunderlane fd up 1st off flash is a guard who knows shining armor 2nd shining will fn destroy thunderlane when flash tells him thunderlane turned his sister into a cheating sl*t. Only question is will flash in a fit of rage let everyone know twilight been cheating on him ....loyalty honesty wont stand for that.... maybe even kindness and laughter will be disappointed she hurt someone. Oooooooh cant wait to see what happens. Maybe he will be willing to share for all we know since she's s*x starved now... guys can be strange when it comes to s*x. But I'm hoping she has flashes kid.
Nice! I especially like the moral degeneration Twilight is undergoing. Cannot wait to see, what Flashs reaction will be and how much Thunderlane will fuck her up.
8223247 Love the sex scene and all but i hate the idea of cheating, i am hoping she loses her friends due to it and thunder-lane gets his teeth smashed in.
I honestly don't like to give you some bad news but this is a Netorare story like mentioned in the description. And such a story normally doesn't entail a happy end for the one who was cheated. I really have nothing against Flash. I just found the topic fascinating and the Requester pretty much helped develop ideas for this along. Of course it makes me wonder now if I should make an alternate ending too to the one that is planned. This isn't after all the first time people reacted towards this story this way. Heck, maybe something along the lines of Flash getting a potion from Zecora to enlarge his cock and Thunderlane together with Flash rut Twilight together.
8231980 Nah it's your story so it's your rules .... I just reallllllly hate thunderlane to many stories of him getting off scott free is all ... flash has a few like that but for some reason thunderlane has like a 100?? It feels like.
About damn time! I've been chomping at the bit!
I do legitimately hope that Flash gets some kind of pay back in the end or something. God knows the poor bastard gets enough shit thrown at him as it is.
i wonder if Twilight got pregnant with Thunderlane's baby yet
Oh s*** thunderlane fd up 1st off flash is a guard who knows shining armor 2nd shining will fn destroy thunderlane when flash tells him thunderlane turned his sister into a cheating sl*t. Only question is will flash in a fit of rage let everyone know twilight been cheating on him ....loyalty honesty wont stand for that.... maybe even kindness and laughter will be disappointed she hurt someone. Oooooooh cant wait to see what happens. Maybe he will be willing to share for all we know since she's s*x starved now... guys can be strange when it comes to s*x. But I'm hoping she has flashes kid.
Nice!
I especially like the moral degeneration Twilight is undergoing. Cannot wait to see, what Flashs reaction will be and how much Thunderlane will fuck her up.
EDIT: Yes in the literal and figurative sense.
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Love the sex scene and all but i hate the idea of cheating, i am hoping she loses her friends due to it and thunder-lane gets his teeth smashed in.
Wait, how did thunderlane came inside her womb while facefucking?
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Just got the wrong word, as I meant the stomach. Corrected it already. So thanks for mentioning it.
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Yeah. Took a bit. I plan to have the next chapter out sooner than this one.
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I honestly don't like to give you some bad news but this is a Netorare story like mentioned in the description. And such a story normally doesn't entail a happy end for the one who was cheated. I really have nothing against Flash. I just found the topic fascinating and the Requester pretty much helped develop ideas for this along. Of course it makes me wonder now if I should make an alternate ending too to the one that is planned. This isn't after all the first time people reacted towards this story this way. Heck, maybe something along the lines of Flash getting a potion from Zecora to enlarge his cock and Thunderlane together with Flash rut Twilight together.
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Nah it's your story so it's your rules .... I just reallllllly hate thunderlane to many stories of him getting off scott free is all ... flash has a few like that but for some reason thunderlane has like a 100?? It feels like.
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Yer knew it was gonna be like that, but i'll still keep readin cause of the *cough* interesting scenes.
I would also think they would experiment.