This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls...?
Continuation of my story series they are pretty much required reading beforehand otherwise you would be very confused. But for those just starting.
An accident brought me here... Equestria, it was strange, amazing, frightening and wonderful. We might search our whole lives for that special someone... Me? Well the universe might have seen fit to do me a favor for here I found that one, Twilight... She's changed everything and then came our adopted daughter Scootaloo and again the birth of our daughter Starswirl. Unlikely? You know it, but please read on, follow our story. I hope you find it... Interesting.
Teen rating represents scenes of lovemaking but non descriptive.
Chapters (12)
Color me interested! Good to see this series is still going strong!
glad to see this series continue
Uh oh.... This... can't be good...
7432732 Agreed! Sound thy warhorns!
I almost mistook that for a pony Nazi until I figured out the context
this mental dialog wasn't colored
7477374 Doh! Thanks!
Hmm... Something was making the Elements go haywire, but what?
Okay, that is just too cute!
found these for you. As much as I like this series I can't let them survive
She couldn't have been more surprised if they tower itself shook [ the ]
"Irreverent! As a Princess of Equestria I am entitled to my perks [ Irrelevant ]
"But perhaps something else needs out attention?" [our]
The dreaded typo strikes again
Celestia and I both trained and worded hard [ worked ]
7546356 Thanks!
7546386 Thanks again!
7551267 Looking forward to the next update,but I personally wouldn't use a tablet for writing as you can easily make typos!
7676092 Too true, and conveniently enough I'm working on it right now! hehe Just so lazy lol
7676095 you and me both! XD
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay Moremoremore! Nauw! Pleeeeeease!?
Glad to see this is still going strong!
This has replaced Hands as my favorite HIE series.
my god... how in celestia's radiant butt did i miss this? i loved the prequels... looks like i got more stuff to read then
Damn... That was unexpected...
Haha, nice one Rick! Glad to see an update!
They made their way to the human world?
7878665 Not quite, Dream has domain across all worlds, boundaries and even dimensions.
It's alive!
Ooer!
Ooh~! I love this story so much, even through all the grammatical word jumbles.
I do hope everything's alright and the story is still going. Get on him, Twilight!
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So fast of a reader! hehe I am working on it not to worry... Soon...? Well I hope so. Glad your liking it!
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Oh, most definitely! There are moments that I have to untangle grammatical knots, but the story more than makes it worth them.
This is the first true self-insert fanfic I've read, and I spent the last week reading from Rick's arrival to now. I'm glad to have stumbled on it.
I can't wait to see what mysteries await in Atlantis, and wish all of you good luck!
Oh, and I do wonder what became of Sunset Shimmer in this universe. Luna must be busy, what with having Night Court, Dream watching, Discord, and a presumed student. That is assuming that's who Celestia had in mind for Sunset's mentor.
Yay the story lives!
huzza, you have returned!!
Just an odd thought from this old dragon. Is there some inspiration from James Blishs' "Cities in Flight" stories here?
I think should be not
and
this section wasn't in telepathy colors
IT'S ALIVE!
I don't want to sound mean but Im just not enjoying your adventure stories, the slice of life is great but the more action adventure ones are tedious
Maybe he should bring up the idea of starting a herd with Twilight
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Huzzah!
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No I've never heard of them... (Looks them up.) Interesting. Just what I need more books to read lol
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Thanks! Can always rely on you for a critical eye.
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Muhahahaha!
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Sorry to hear that, well can't please everyone. I'm glad you enjoy parts of my stories though and I hope you will continue to.
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Hmm... I probably don't want to get turned into some sort of newt...
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Would fix the Luna and Malore problem though would work better if one of her friends were interested though
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In my ongoing quest to help others fill their copious amounts of free time I add these to your reading list.
The Retief stories by Keith Laumer, also his bolo stories. and Tim Zahns' Cobra series.
Looong history...
By the way could you give siphon another telephatic color? I'm reading in medium dark and white is an unrecognizable color. Thx
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You really are trying to get me killed! Twi's bad enough you want to get Discord involved?!
Sniffing around my mare are you? I should have known. However... Perhaps a bit of menage a toi...?
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Awesome!
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Good idea, hmm... Maybe... Teal?
last line reminded me of a quote from Winnie the Pooh
ok i started reading the first story 3 days ago.... and well... i just powered through every single story till i just finished reading this last chapter
i can't wait to read more! this story is so FILLED with passion and oh god! THE EMOTION! this story is very moving (it open up the waterworks for me in a few chapters 
) 
i love this story and can't wait for future updates
NOOOOOOOOOO! I'm caught up!
Yes, it lives!!!!
A NEW CHAPTER ITS A SIGN OF THE APOCALYPSE!
Nah. My procrastination beats yours.
Hmm.
Those last few sentences seem like that mental communication thing going on between Rick and Twilight.
But you neglected to colour them; so I don't know which one suggested that bombshell.
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Ack! You are correct, and fixed. Thanks!
Keep this series alive!!! PLEASE LIKE HIS BOOKS!
As I remember, thanks to their soul link twi and rick have an extended lifespan.
I just can't remenber how much longer this two will be around.
So twi saying they could have another could be true for many "generations"?
...I'm starting to suspect the Miasma is the old city Elders' will still trying to survive and conquer the Source.