This story is a sequel to Ponies on Bronies
Notice: This is third in my Ponies on series. Please begin where you're supposed to or things might be a bit confusing. I'm not sure if it needs to be said but I'm gonna say it just to be sure. If you haven't been a brony hiding under a rock then lots of Season 3 inbound!
Things get a little weird as soon as we return to Alex, Twilight, and Rainbow. The wedding is over and done with, and we join the trio on their honeymoon trip to the tropics (thanks to Shining Armor and Cadance). With twenty percent more implying, will the teen rating hold or will I have to add something strange and unusual?
This story is rated PL (Princess Luna) for themes suited for young adults and some really messed up shit.
20% more implying! Epic.
Hmm, now I want to see Twilight and Dashie in all that "gear"...
Might be the last thing I see but it'll be worth it.
Oh my, a new story already! I hope it's good, looks interesting so far, and I'm glad you're keeping kind of with canon despite Alex there to bollocks it all up!
2549466 You'll see how the story and the show differ. There's also a surprise or twelve, but no confetti. My usual confetti supplier, GLaDOS, has informed me that she no longer has any.
Curiouser and curiuouser
Socks, Oh the socks! And the bridle... who knew Twi liked that kind of stuff eh?
for the thirtieth time, than a grey scarf and blue mane started to come into view
1. Then.
She must be so glad it wasn't a paternity test eh? Now how will they face Sombra in this situation? I am very curious to know...
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Curious indeed
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As am- wait, should I really be saying that?
2595035 It doesn't help that I see plot on the right side of my screen with that kinda comment
2595089 and not once on that post did I get a "dat plot" comment...
2595102 i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/7031873280/hC79523EA/
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Hmmmmm
Its sad we didnt saw the wedding or (maybe) some crazy adventures they had at the beginning of their honeymoon.
2604896 I had debated it since starting the rewrite as a whole, but I came up with nothing.
swaggie
If this is going where it's gonna go... Does Twilight have good upper body strength? That reminds me... Spike didn't tag along this time? Oh wait, that could apply as well... Hmm...
Hmmm
I love how well you added the OC in this story series in a way that doesn't severely change the flow of the canon, but also gives said OC something meaningful to do other than saying "and I was there, too!" That isn't an easy thing to do for many writers on this site, and you do it like it comes naturally.
Even if it does take a very long time between updates.
3160541 The time is part of the process from altering the canon to permit an OC to function in events takes so much
ing time. Also, I'm pretty sure you recall I mentioned a while ago that I had lost my writing muse per se.
3160581I'll go put up a poster, then.
*ahem*
LOST: ONE WRITING MUSE
If found, please contact:
RAVENMANE
Reward: MORE GLORIOUS WORDS FLOWING THROUGH THE INTERNET
how's that?
3160866 I found it on the way to class last week, I've been writing since (with the occasional bout of "research" for my not so top secret project)
3161952 Good on ya! Don't forget to punch that initiative, and the dwarf king.
Soo... Husband. I can't remember for my life if they were wed officially or unofficially.
Doesn't mean Spike would stop being their future son who went back into the past and by doing so aged backwards thus gaining infinite life but forever forgetting their future together and thus begins the Endless Eight of The Melancholy of Spike the Dragon.
Edit of Emergency: Seems like the author of this fic somehow found my contact and corrected me about them being wed. I'm now scared for dear life if the author has contacts that we cannot see. That and I'm currently playing too much AC:B at the moment. Getting 100% Sync is real annoying for some missions
What.... I what it's been that long since I've read this can somepony tell me what's happened in the last few books?
3895640 The Crystal Empire but reshaped with the events of the previous two stories (and a wedding that I couldn't write). More episodes, new content, and a few surprises, to follow. Back in Bronies I even had the connection to the internet tied to Alex's computer and I intend to explain why he would have passed when Season 3 has started but never able to find it.
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okey dokey loki
3902585 Fleshing it out. My plan for the next chapter is more challenging than you'd expect.
Welp. I binged on this series for a day and a half, and now I'm caught up. *sigh* Welp, On to more pressing matters.
I hope to see a new chapter soon. I love your work and wish to read more.
I felt like I had been wandering around in the pitch-black void for hours with nothing by the dull sound of my hooves against the ground
I tried to near the source of these voices as quietly as possible
I spent a the rest of the day gradually recovering
If Spike didn’t go with me then I’m sure King Sombra would have us all under his spell
1. But.
2. I think you meant: I tried to get nearer to the source of these voices.
3. Extra A.
4. Personally, I think the latter part should be; King Sombra would have had us all under his spell. But that could be my preference.
Other than a few noticable errors, i enjoyed the read and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Question; Did you actually mean Not?
Is this an extra A here?
Interesting info on the estrus cycle. Wonder how you thought it up. And the condom industry is making a profit offa Alex, Twilight and Rainbow. Possibly. Maybe.
Normal ain't coming back Alex, not for a long shot.
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You forget, normal is all a matter of perspective. As far as he's concerned, Ponyville is normal.
4853620 maybe I should just say that there's more spice coming in his life and Ponyville is the pot brewing it all
Rule number one Alex; Whenever a guy is in trouble, he takes much more notice of his surroundings just to take the heat off of him. So what you should have done is quickly either left the gear in its place and hide or take the gear with you along with your other... Gear and hide.
Though I'll just say that you're probably just paralyzed with fear instead. For reasons.
New chapter! YAY!!
6161432 I didn't lie when I said I'd have something sometime soon a blog entry ago did I
6161511 Nope. You did not, good sir. For that, I salute you *salutes while using Pinkies Right hoof*.