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pregnant tiddies

As unbirthing takes go, this is vastly awesome. Can't wait for more!

Holy shit.
You tied this into The Drinks Are On US.
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FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!

Oh my god! You tied it into Drinks Are On Us at the end! You fucking mad man!

This is a very interesting idea, and I wonder if you do have an idea for each of the mane 6 here, seeing that you tied it in as you have. Good luck on the writing!

Okay so apparently, she's a hermaphrodite now.

Clopfics in a nutshell.

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Just knew I'd mess up /somewhere/, lemme fix that.

This reminds me a lot of something I wrote a couple years ago, just from the description.

Can't read it right now, but definitely will later.

>shorry
>hurtsh
>Jusht... shprained

-Why is Flitter having some weird language problem ? This is just 'odd' at best, if not annoying.

>decided to go rouge.
-Ok... Whatever the language, whatever the accent or ''accent''... I'm docking points for that one. -_-

At least, the idea is rather original. Not bad, so far.

7430780 According to the story, she took a faceplant into the dirt. That could cause a speech-impeding injury, I would guess.

And just caught up. Excellent work! Surprisingly plot-heavy for clop, especially endo clop, but it's a subject matter that's difficult to tackle and even more difficult to do well, so I'm all for this.

Nova25 #16 · Jul 27th, 2016 · · 1 · 2 ·

7430842 Mh. Well, to make things more clear, there should be a line added to that effect. Like she bit her tongue or something.

After all, RD crashes all the time and she always speaks fine.

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I don't think I'm the only one who hears a lisp in her speech when she was talking in Hurricane Fluttershy.
Also, there's no points system in place as far as I'm aware. If I spelled it wrong, tell me I spelled it wrong, and I'll fix it.

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Why can't she have one? I don't remember her ever talkin in the show.

Nova25 #19 · Aug 1st, 2016 · · 1 · 2 ·

7432079 Sigh.
1) This is literally the first time I have ever heard this about RD... from the thousands of comments seen at tens of places, at this point in time. But, personal perception is a thing, so whatever.

2a ) Points... not literally. It's a known figure of speech.
2b ) 'Rouge' is an... annoyingly common error people do when writing 'rogue'. I just seen this one too often, that's all.

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Who said anything about RD? I was talking about Flitter. I though this entire thing was about Flitter in the first place.
Flitter had lines in Hurricane Fluttershy. How she spoke them, led me to believe she had the lisp.
And thank you, I've gone ahead and corrected the spelling on all instances of the word.

"Sweet meercifuul heevans." he swore to himself, before looking around and then craning his neck to look up at his Host's face. "Ees naught rocket scieence. Hand 'em t' me an aye'll carry'em inside. Ach, Fleecetail, haagen velt roighten f'taghn, naa?"

Is this a Scotch brogue, butchered German, or an attempt to summon Cthulhu?

7443583 A Scotsman attempting to use German rocket science to summon Cthulu. :twilightsmile:

You gotta non-futa version for us straights?

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I've had worse ideas for my Crack of Cthulhu games. The Narwhal Cannon stands out as a particularly egregious event.

7444241 Fuck you mean? Man up and take your cocking like a man! :rainbowlaugh:


7445168 GG. made my lols for the day!

7443583 It's definitely SOME sort of modern Scandinavian.
Dutch, German, Polish, I don't know, but one of them.

7446297 I personally think it's more in the lines of the austrian variant of German (which is pretty archaic) or Silesian. German accent with partally slavic pronouncing. Not really scandinavian as I don't see much in terms of their letters counterparts in there.

7447530 Yeah, but you knew what I was talking about. That's all that matters.

7448523 You made a lot of mistakes speaking abaut the language groups. Nether Polish nor German are Scandinavian languages. Scandinavian means North Germanic and only Dutch is in this group. German itself is a West Germanic language and Polish is Slavic, what is a diffrent bucket entirely.

This breezie dialect however could be irish if I'm not mistaken. Which is beyond any of those groups. And if it's not, then it's propably something along the lines of Silesian and Sorbian - languages spoken by slavic people which langauge evolved extremely close to german.

7448850 I'm Australian, so I was making vague grabs at distant straws.

But Breezie language is not Gaelic, I can tell you that much.
I'm over half Irish, and my mother and patriarchal grandmother both know Gaelic, so believe me when I say Breezie language is nothing like it.

7449011 I'm not that knowledgeable at the details but I know from what you're going at.

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The times I'm not using complete gibberish, I've been using a stretched-vowel variation of Dutch.

7449567 So the gibberish parts got me lost.

I would love to be one of those breezies! :pinkiehappy:

Little inconsistent there. Gastheers are apparently insanely important to the Breezie's culture, and Seabreeze even mentioned that they've used stallions as Gastheers in the past, they would definitely have known whether or not a Breezie mare could get pregnant by being hosted inside a pony's testicles.

Unless Seabreeze is lying to Flutters' face and the mares knew they could get pregnant by Fluttershy and did it on purpose and he's protecting them from their host's ire?

7489097 it is possible that only breezie stallions went THERE in the stallion hosts.....unlikely but possible

Well, thats a whammy to end on for this chapter.

it gets better

And no one's noted the OTHER possible issue from breezies getting pregnant from a pony...namely, how big will the kids get before they come out?

She did her best not to dwell upon the fact that his own member was now inside hers

Penisception.

7490193 My question is will they give birth before they have to leave her balls?
Because I doubt they'll get out if they don't.

Dammit Fluttershy, why'd you rile them up?

OK, since my mind is in the gutter half of the time and from what it looks like, it's a bit of an unbirthing fic (since the Breezies need to be in Fluttershy's balls, pussy, and tits--thank Celestia that none of them had to take a place up her butt as another place to shelter from the elements), I have to already assume that Applejack's pregnant, based on that last few lines in this chapter.

So the question is, who's the stallion (or mare, Fluttershy have both sets of reproductive parts, I have to assume she's not the only herm pony there) that knocked up Applejack, if that is really the case?

7489097 Maybe they did not know. After all some details may be lost in legends and time.

This story is worth watching and no for the clop - nut for the insane lore and comedy moments. It's trely breathtaking!

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Larger inconsistency here:

"... eeach an' every breezie that took up in yoor testes, wuz a mare. All eight o' them. An' bye nou, they've been sittin' in seemen fur almoost tweenty hours..."

If all of the Breezies in her nuts were mares...

A single stirring in the base of her cock caused her to bite her lip, as she felt that one wayward breezie climb back up and out of her urethra. She couldn't see over the immense shelf that was her bosom, but she could hear and feel the little one take wing, and fly up to her face, revealing themselves to be a lavender pixie, with a white mane. She got the distinct feeling that they were a colt.

...then how did he get in there?

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"Eight breezie mares, all of them impregnated, by me, with my own foals... so many foals... and I'm taking you all home. When you'll leave. And those foals will never see their father, ever again...

I don't think Fluttershy will have to worry about the young Breezies not seeing their father because if they get born inside Fluttershy and be raise inside her might result with the young Breezies not wanting to leave the safe insides of their father/home.
With the young Breezies with a pony as their father I think the Breezies will grow up to be pony-size Breezies like in this pic:
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7519687 Who knows abaut their size? I'm more-or-less convinced they'll be normal breezies.

Oh my heavenly god! :D
I would love to see all female Breezies finally give birth to their foals badly! :D

7489097 Dangit. I didn't even see it, and let it slip right by me. I don't suppose I could get away with rewriting the chapter, or rationalizing it away later, can I?

7500782 I've got another story on here. Go take a gander at that if you wanna know what's going on with AJ.

7515486 I dunno if you missed it, but he climbed up there in desperation a bit earlier, while all the Breezies were hurrying back in.

New chapter coming up, apologies for the wait. Dead comps and other things all piled on me.

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