This is a very interesting idea, and I wonder if you do have an idea for each of the mane 6 here, seeing that you tied it in as you have. Good luck on the writing!
And just caught up. Excellent work! Surprisingly plot-heavy for clop, especially endo clop, but it's a subject matter that's difficult to tackle and even more difficult to do well, so I'm all for this.
7431030 I don't think I'm the only one who hears a lisp in her speech when she was talking in Hurricane Fluttershy. Also, there's no points system in place as far as I'm aware. If I spelled it wrong, tell me I spelled it wrong, and I'll fix it.
7432079 Sigh. 1) This is literally the first time I have ever heard this about RD... from the thousands of comments seen at tens of places, at this point in time. But, personal perception is a thing, so whatever.
2a ) Points... not literally. It's a known figure of speech. 2b ) 'Rouge' is an... annoyingly common error people do when writing 'rogue'. I just seen this one too often, that's all.
7442399 Who said anything about RD? I was talking about Flitter. I though this entire thing was about Flitter in the first place. Flitter had lines in Hurricane Fluttershy. How she spoke them, led me to believe she had the lisp. And thank you, I've gone ahead and corrected the spelling on all instances of the word.
OK, since my mind is in the gutter half of the time and from what it looks like, it's a bit of an unbirthing fic (since the Breezies need to be in Fluttershy's balls, pussy, and tits--thank Celestia that none of them had to take a place up her butt as another place to shelter from the elements), I have to already assume that Applejack's pregnant, based on that last few lines in this chapter.
So the question is, who's the stallion (or mare, Fluttershy have both sets of reproductive parts, I have to assume she's not the only herm pony there) that knocked up Applejack, if that is really the case?
Fucking mosquito pony bugs on a fine piece of ass?
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pregnant tiddies
As unbirthing takes go, this is vastly awesome. Can't wait for more!
Holy shit.
You tied this into The Drinks Are On US.
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FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!
Oh my god! You tied it into Drinks Are On Us at the end! You fucking mad man!
This is a very interesting idea, and I wonder if you do have an idea for each of the mane 6 here, seeing that you tied it in as you have. Good luck on the writing!
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Just knew I'd mess up /somewhere/, lemme fix that.
This reminds me a lot of something I wrote a couple years ago, just from the description.
Can't read it right now, but definitely will later.
>decided to go rouge.
-Ok... Whatever the language, whatever the accent or ''accent''... I'm docking points for that one. -_-
At least, the idea is rather original. Not bad, so far.
And just caught up. Excellent work! Surprisingly plot-heavy for clop, especially endo clop, but it's a subject matter that's difficult to tackle and even more difficult to do well, so I'm all for this.
7430842 Mh. Well, to make things more clear, there should be a line added to that effect. Like she bit her tongue or something.
After all, RD crashes all the time and she always speaks fine.
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I don't think I'm the only one who hears a lisp in her speech when she was talking in Hurricane Fluttershy.
Also, there's no points system in place as far as I'm aware. If I spelled it wrong, tell me I spelled it wrong, and I'll fix it.
7432079 Sigh.
1) This is literally the first time I have ever heard this about RD... from the thousands of comments seen at tens of places, at this point in time. But, personal perception is a thing, so whatever.
2a ) Points... not literally. It's a known figure of speech.
2b ) 'Rouge' is an... annoyingly common error people do when writing 'rogue'. I just seen this one too often, that's all.
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Who said anything about RD? I was talking about Flitter. I though this entire thing was about Flitter in the first place.
Flitter had lines in Hurricane Fluttershy. How she spoke them, led me to believe she had the lisp.
And thank you, I've gone ahead and corrected the spelling on all instances of the word.
OK, since my mind is in the gutter half of the time and from what it looks like, it's a bit of an unbirthing fic (since the Breezies need to be in Fluttershy's balls, pussy, and tits--thank Celestia that none of them had to take a place up her butt as another place to shelter from the elements), I have to already assume that Applejack's pregnant, based on that last few lines in this chapter.
So the question is, who's the stallion (or mare, Fluttershy have both sets of reproductive parts, I have to assume she's not the only herm pony there) that knocked up Applejack, if that is really the case?
7500782 Read: The Drinks Are On Us
Then you'll understand!
Ah, so this and your other story are in a shared universe.