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Azelze The Mephistocorn


If you haven't noticed yet, I'm the kind of writer who writes stories about things that most people don't even think about. I'm creative (insane) like that ;)

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Okay, this story was hit as hell and I find your protagonist to be charismatic with all the sarcasm he uses on his lines. The scene with Zecora was hit as hell, especially the oral scene. You have a fav and a like from me. Hope the next chapter comes soon.

7321681 hit?

Thanks! This was actually my first clop scene! I'm glad I did okay.

7321757 I meant hot not hit. Typo from iPad

7321759 out of curiosity, how'd you stumble upon this fic? Or are you following me?

7321783 I was checking on Fimfiction and found your fic at the top of the newest fic section. I checked it out and then, before seeing the story, I saw what stories you had. I already faved that story about the Changelling and the four mares before. Then, I read your fic and the rest is history.

7321835 oh, you read 'One and a Million'! I'm very proud of that story:pinkiehappy:

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7322526 who do you guys think should be next?

7322779 definitely an option but I wanna save the six for a little later (heaven knows I'm gonna struggle with Pinkie). For now I'm going for one or two background characters

7322791 read the other comments and take part my friend! The story is about you after all!

7322791 wait, you're the guy who made 'the sun's son'! I freaking love that Story!

7322839 that's great cause I'm just making shit up as I go along XD

7322920 pretty sure that's how most of One Direction's song are sung.

7323007 I'm guessing the other half was spent throwing up? No?

Good story, my guess is all the guys are skipping town for heat week. My vote for who should be next is: Cloudchaser and/or Flitter. They are looking for their runaway boyfriend and the only evidince is an empty vial from his shop.

7323157 week? No no no no my friend. This is gonna be a LOOOOONG story.
Hhmhmmmhmm...hehehehehe...hahahahah.......MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH *cough! Cough! Gasp!*........well that killed the mood....

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Hehehe, well Discord obviously has a claw in this so we cant rule out anything.

Batshit crazy? I love batshit crazy!

good god what the fuck just HAPPENED??? Also, are they meant to be ponies or human?

-shows random SEMI-Normal clopfic- this is your brain. -shows this story- this is your brain on every drug possible

How about elania mash (buttons mom) also will you be doing (pun intended) fillies

7323597 The tag says anthro.

7324805 foalcon - no. Shota (meaning human so YOU'RE the kid. You're screwing kids....I think. I haven't really decided) - yes

You want there to be? I'm not even sure if fillies are effected by heat

I hate to be this guy because every fic has this guy, but you need an editor. There are multiple spelling issues where your computer or you switched out a few words for close ones. Read your story out loud and you will hear them.

Apart from that, decent fic and I'll give it a track.

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Will you be his editor?

7325063 Nay, I have my own editor and too little time.

Not saying you would but if you are going to say "Well if you won't edit then shut up", I would like to mention that there are multiple groups and people who would easily like to go over stories, especially clop. Also having a friend go over it can help as well since there are a few errors one can catch having someone proofread it.

Bring it.

“It's even bigger when it's erect. Such a shaft deserve great respect,” She moaned as she began to rub herself against it.

Well, you could argue with that.

Don't you mean "couldn't argue"?

Anyone but the mane 6, huh?

...Princess Luna!

...alternatively, Vinyl Scratch.

On a different note,

While you were nice to all the mone - CLIENTS that entered your store, there were a select few who manager to get on your shitlist, such as a certain blonde stuck up unicron.
Royal discount indeed…

So Blueblood is a transforming, planet eating robot. Okay, I'll buy that.:trollestia:

Bonbon, you know you want that sweet candy ass:raritywink:

I would choose Either Rainbow Dash or Twilight Sparkle or possibly both for a three way then Rarity walks in on them

Ok um, love the story. Might be stupid but I was thinking rainbow dash. She bought a potion from him at one point to make her wings lighter, but instead of rubbing the potion on her wings like instructed she drank it. Now she's lactating and looking to get even. Was thinking she could prank the main character into sucking her tits but honestly I have no idea lol.

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I think Luna and Celestia must be on dessert.

And yup, threesome with Vinyl and Octavia would be nice.

7328084

I immediately saw this upon reading the comments and homed in on titty suckling.

Am I a bad person for wanting this?

Actually, am I a bad person for not even reading the story yet because I saw something in the peripheral of my eyes about suckling Rainbow Dash's tits?

“Y-You - ah! - make my h-heart beat like the Zanzebran drum! D-don’t stop, I'm about to cum!”

Props to making the Zebra homeland not Zebrica!

7332029 was that sarcasm or not? I can't tell.

7330508 I just took one look at your display pic and thought 'when I do a chapter involving celestia, I'm gonna put some extra detail in her ass, just for this guy':rainbowlaugh:

7332068 :rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
Celestia sitting on Anon's face and said that she will stand up only when he will worship her ass properly.:trollestia:
I am just joking.

I vote for derpy

Really nice story. I can't wait for chapter 2. :pinkiehappy:

Since villains buy from the shop as well, will Queen Chrysalis show up eventually?

As for the next pony, how about Mrs. Cake or Ms. Cheerlie?

7330870 lol your not a bad person. Read this story, trust me it's good. I was just throwing my own idea out there about what he could do with rd. But who knows what will happen.

Ah crap I misread the part about anyone but main six. Well hmmm I guess my next choice would be Derpy, or the dj can't think of her name for the life of me at the moment.

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Already read it and enjoyed it greatly but yeah the DJ's name is Vinyl scratch and I have to agree.

Seeing the DJ get boned would be tops if its pulled off right.

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Nah mate, that was legit. It's really refreshing to see another name every once in a while.

7333977 without her saying a word, I like the idea of vynil being mute.

But my pick is lyre.

7334349 you're the first person to not suggest Vinyl

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