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Azelze The Mephistocorn


If you haven't noticed yet, I'm the kind of writer who writes stories about things that most people don't even think about. I'm creative (insane) like that ;)

Comments ( 27 )

It looks okay but you need an editor.

I like it I really like the spasztic way they act you can tell they really love each other

How about adding a random tag if unity is going to have a big part?

Man, this story seems interesting. I like how bizarre Unity, especially Unity with her love of squeaking baskets, and her herd act around Waspy and just how clueless they are when dealing with motherhood. You get a fav.

I still like it where in the timeline is this it is this an alternate without the Mane 6?

7293365 this is before twilight comes to town. After another chapter or two, the story will follow the original timeline (with some minor changes)

Soon. Soon ve vill fly! And ve. And ve! *achoo* sorry, the swarm will rise with Waspy as our ruler!

I always liked the type of shows or stories were a single boy is raised or grows up in a all girl house.

Cookies there are COOKIES...can i have one

I know your other story The Merchant of Equestria! is doing better but please done forget about this one :D

Well. Unity seems a bit... excitable is a polite way to put it XD

I can tell little Wasp is in for an interesting home life.

Good to see your back, can't wait for the next update.

Loved the chapter, especially since we meet the mothers of Trixie, Octavia, Vinyl, and Lyra. Hope the next one comes soon to see how Waspy interacts with his new friends when he grows up

Wait, is Twilight going to make friends with these five?

I ship Waspy with Trixie. Let's be honest, his abilities are useful for her future road show. Not to mention he could stroke Trixie's ego and narcism by turning into a male form of her during nightly activities. :trollestia:

Hah, this was an interesting chap-

I AM ALIVE!
IMMORTALIZED!

YOU'RE THE CREATOR, YOU TRAITOR!

It is a tragedy when a promising story with a interesting plot dies:applecry::raritycry:

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