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Azelze The Mephistocorn

If you haven't noticed yet, I'm the kind of writer who writes stories about things that most people don't even think about. I'm creative (insane) like that ;)

Azelze The Mephistocorn Joined 27th Apr, 2016 · Offline

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xXIllusionFoxXx
xXIllusionFoxXx #1 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · 1 ·
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It was okay, it could use a little work on the pacing.
Some parts felt too rushed, and others just dragged on for too long.
But other than that, I enjoyed it. I know I can't force myself to write 10,000 words for one chapter, lol.
Just one question, how old are the heroes? I know Keldeo is old enough to have fantasies about Virizion, but they also act like little kids, not teenagers, so it's just a little unclear.

Azelze The Mephistocorn
Azelze The Mephistocorn #2 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · 2 ·
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7540439 those too short and too long parts were basically my attempt to keep on jugging after I ran out of words. You ever have that problem? It sucks!

I'd say they've JUST reached that age

xXIllusionFoxXx
xXIllusionFoxXx #3 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · 1 ·
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7540501 Yeah, I get that problem a lot too. You're definitely not alone!

Texus
Texus #4 · Nov 1st, 2016 · · 1 ·
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There will be clop AT SOME POINT!

I don't mind as long as it isn't overdone, and I would like to have a believeable romance.

this sounds familiar, but I'm going to read it later anyway.

SilverStarApple
SilverStarApple #5 · Apr 8th, 2018 · · 1 ·
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Hey, that's pretty good! Liked and followed.

CosmosGalen
CosmosGalen #6 · Jun 21st, 2018 · · ·
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So in addition to never getting updates done you also support bestiality?

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