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Azelze The Mephistocorn


If you haven't noticed yet, I'm the kind of writer who writes stories about things that most people don't even think about. I'm creative (insane) like that ;)

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This is the first RWBY OC displaced in equestria that I have found. You have caught my interest.
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I'm intrigued

7216413 I'm not sure if it's really a Displaced as much as it is a FiE. Then again, I'm still new to this fandom so I don't know all the terms yet.

7217256 It might be HiE actually. Or in your case FiE.

7217912 I think I'm going to have to make a new chapter one. I kind of wrote myself into a corner.

I like the second rendition better. Unlike the previous version with Fluttershy, this version with the cmc gives you a better idea of how the rest of equestria might react to Myotis Neo.

KO crazy chapter, hope he doesn't go overboard with the fighting and try to get along with the girls. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Author's Note:

:rainbowhuh: Human... I'd rather not imagine what a... :pinkiesick: I don't even want to say it

KO awesome chapter, hopefully Myotis will get a chance of living in ponyville and be friends with the friends. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

7254999 that's too over done. Let him do what any sane individual would do if confronted with biased, xenophobic ponies,leave.
The world is HUGE! I'd like to have a story where the mc isn't confined in a little town where if you weren't a pony, you were a monster. Never mind the fact that he looked injured, skinny and was a head smaller than the shortest made. He's just a monster that needs to be thrown back into a monster infested forest and be done with it.
From what I can see, he'd be better off looking elsewhere, maybe with a theseral colony down in hollow shades? They'd accept him, he's practically one of them!
What I'm saying is that I hope this story expands from the typical mane six centered types that flood the site.
He's got wings for Oum's sake! He can go anywhere he wants, let the winds of freedom take him to better lands. As soon as he explains thing leaving out the whole Agent of Chaos thing.
Let him cause chaos elsewhere! When the mane six find out how much they screwed up their chance to make a great friend, THAT will be the most Delicious type of chaos...

Rant over, great story Brah!!!

i like tis story i hope 2 c more

you dizerve mor cred than this

‘Where the hell is his weiner?!’ He found himself asking.

:rainbowlaugh: I died at that line.
Just read any clop fic with spike tagged in it. You'll find your answer there.

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7255789 actually I got an idea that will please everyone. You see, I have too versions of this story planned. Neo version (which is this one) and Xeno version (which is the one Lard Kalbario described). Both versions split off from 'an overdue freakout'

I'm getting seriously tired of people ending up In equestria and being complete doormats. Plus, Dash would not have been able to dodge a shotgun blast at subsonic speeds. Hell, even at rainboom speeds it would be almost impossible at close range!

7329189 you don't really I'm gonna let those ponies off the hook that easily do you?:trixieshiftright: I write nothing without reason so don't worry, Myotis gets payback

7390217 never thought you'd end up typing that in a comment section huh?

7392260 i have not read the story but from the name on the description you named the protagonist after Myotismon didn't you?

7460160 that and it was the most bat like name I could think of

7460172 cool, i still cannot wait the next update of "The Merchant of Equestria"

Isn't Myotis a biology thing *googles it* no wait thinking of myosis and is his weapons just shotguns or do they turn into a melee weapon like a mace or smithing like that but best RWBY crossover story I seen so far

after the bitch im fabulous i can now only think about it in my head as markiplier voice

The ponies are xenophobic idiots. They see an injured creature and attack because they automatically assume he's an evil monster without even attempting diplomacy first.

8685610
Don't worry, I'm rewriting the story. Big changes, my friend.

And definitely not doing the pansy-crying/whining BS.

8685620
No, it's not. Quite frankly I doubt you'll ever get to it again, just blowing smoke outta your a** and are now being a coward to that situation and just not owning up to it.

He's weak and a retard, nice combination bat boy.

Hey author, if you'd like I could do some proofreading for you, since I've noticed quite a few mistakes throughout the few chapters that I've read and I really like the idea of this story. Just hit me up with a pm with your decision on my offer and we'll work it out form there, I personally want to see where this story goes.

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