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Little_Draco
Young, Clueless, a dragon with hunger for a hoard of knowledge but my hoard is to be spread with friends, families and more.
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Friend, what a good start and with only one chapter I already want to see what is coming up, and I must ask, it is possible that in the future there will be an anthrop version
oh lord what a great Start, really Looking forward to see how this is Going to Go.
I don't know if I should be amused at this or concerned by it.
Though I am actually glad the four terrors are apparently alright.
All right a sequel
Ok..............Well then I say the best way to punish those dam selfish bitches is to reveal the whole Truth to their kids on how their mommies hurt Daddy so badly!
that he lost any and almost all self worth and confidence and may take years to ever even begin to recover.
Their reactions would be a great punishment.
im excited for the yelling
10458994
Yeah. Karma will beat or torture ALL Four of those bitchly Rapists!!!!!
Plus, those kids will be traumatized that their births were born from Rape. 😡
I pity them, but I think they hate their moms for what happened to Dusk, and the fact they were born from a Disgusting and Evil Act (Rape). 😠
10459179
Sighs that is true.
10459209
Yeah it sucks. 😣
I feel bad for Dusk. I hope the Four Villainesses feel Regret, A LOT OF GUILT! 😤
10458820
Maybe, if i can remind myself properly.
10458848
Answers will be given soon!
10458994
Judgment is waiting!!
Well it was nice to see that you have a sequel to this fic. I can't wait to see what's dusk and spike when they wake up again. See you next month or less.
10461412
Dont worry, maybe a new chapter will be uploaded soon
It's an interesting and good start to the fic, personally I think it has a lot of potential to give it the final closure that Dusk and the rest of the girls deserve.
I find it interesting that from the beginning it was understood that the villains managed to have and raise their children until they reached a more or less adequate age to undertake the journey of meeting their father.
It should also be noted that it was well thought out that the scene of Dusk teleporting away from the Princesses, to then be alone with Goddess Faust and then appear in her tree house, occurred in a plane of space and time that did not affect the flow, as if his teleportation was never interrupted, to then be sent by the creator of everything to where he wanted to go from the beginning, giving peace to Dusk who did not know his origin, a situation that even Spike could notice that positive change in his brother.
And although the way the villains and the ponies appeared in Dusk's library was unexpected, I have to admit that I imagined the scene so clearly with everything and special effects ^^.
And it was not for less that after meeting again with those girls who made Dusk go through both physical and emotional torment, he still felt dominated by his latent fears, but what must have surprised him the most was knowing that all the abuse that suffered in the hooves and claws of the villains, he would come to fulfill the role they wanted since his change of plans to take revenge on Dusk, and they could have his children, so much so that Dusk and Spike could not help fainting at such a revelation.
Of all the villains, Nightmare Moon is the one who least Dusk should not fear him compared to the other 3, since she not only opened up sentimentally and emotionally, she also wanted to fix things with Dusk and help him to convince the other girls, I hope that whatever happens, Dusk can give Nightmare Moon another chance and not hold a grudge against her.
I can't wait to read the next chapter, but the wait will be worth it ^^.
I think this can make a very funny story.
looking forward to dusk bonding with his kids and nightmare. less so with the other 3 but dusk seems put together enough to be civil with them and at worst can voice his displesure with them and ask them to leave
could be genuine please for help, at least from 1 of them
I still don't understand how and why Nightmare was punished when she wasn't in the control.
Didn't they reveal that they also brainwashed her ?
The wait for this was worth it indeed, tho i got to ask, in the poll is Nr 2 is that them becoming a Family?
i wonder what happen to the hive when the queen was gone
10507204
They don't know that, with everything being them villians and the scenes behind not scene. Don't worry something the story will dish out details.
10507224
Not exactly
10507236
That will be answered in the next chapter or another.
10507243
ah alright, i really should have ask before voting well that's my bad
10507250
Its mostly on how his interactions with them is really determined.
if not now then i hope dusks children get the information of what their mothers did and why dusk didnt like their mothers so they can understand the situation. either way i hope we get to see dusk bonding with his kids and the villens turning over a new leaf
10507258
ah ok, that Cleans it up Fully, then it seens i still picked what i want i aim at Cheers, else i wish you a Great Day
10507262
bonding will happen.... but the choice is really yours on how they bond
10507270
WOW AMAZING CHAPTER
I'm not going to vote sorry but seems bne incest no matter what. Sorry not a fan of that so sorry but outta here.
I didn't see anything wrong I thought this was a story where the villainous comes back and tries to start up a family with him.
10508646
The other options are that he only has interactions with the villianess, the foals have their own sexual exploitation with other foals, or i dont write about them ever having sex until mature age.
Only one option has their father involved.
10508652
Its not that. Its if readers want to see him also sexually active with the foals as well. If not your idea vote for something else.
10508646
Yea, votes to keep it as is without the foals is majority right now.
10508659
You could save it for another story. Like, Dusk Shine Vs. The Talk where he either demonstrates to his foals the birds and the bees himself (Dusk with his foals), explains the birds and the bees after the become active (Dusks foals with other foals) or has the talk before they become active (foals become mature first).
10508966
Ok good. Thou not happy with the idea of any of those whores getting together with Dusk, after what they done.
But hoping they are permanently powerless, and be in a weaken state.
Also hope they learn what they put Dusk thru, heck they should be given Dusk's nightmares as punishment!
10508992
I’m personally interested in Nightmare Moon and Dusk Shine since she was the only one remorseful with the actions she took kinda against her will.
As for the others. Well, I’m interested enough to see where he takes it.
Yeah I think that would consider them M.I.L.F since dusk is way younger than them
Great chapter! Loved the Thorax part.
10552527
So... into the milf folder in the future?
10552579
Wasn't even sure if it would help or work. Thanks!
i know they are trying to defend him But, Luna is Giving me some Heavy jealousy vibs, along with some Rage, But thats a Given do to who nightmare is. i love it
this is going to get wild
so they are going to be fixed, i wonder how long till the jealousy of the other mares in Dusk life manifest.
10552825
Oh, its more then just jelly! Its gonna get like Jerry show wild.
10552886
Mhmmmm.... like a chapter or two.
10552640
I’m glad you tried it. It was a nice little bit of world building.
This is getting gooood...