Friend, what a good start and with only one chapter I already want to see what is coming up, and I must ask, it is possible that in the future there will be an anthrop version

oh lord what a great Start, really Looking forward to see how this is Going to Go.

I don't know if I should be amused at this or concerned by it.

Though I am actually glad the four terrors are apparently alright.

All right a sequel

Ok..............Well then I say the best way to punish those dam selfish bitches is to reveal the whole Truth to their kids on how their mommies hurt Daddy so badly!
that he lost any and almost all self worth and confidence and may take years to ever even begin to recover.

Their reactions would be a great punishment.

im excited for the yelling

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Yeah. Karma will beat or torture ALL Four of those bitchly Rapists!!!!!

Plus, those kids will be traumatized that their births were born from Rape. 😡

I pity them, but I think they hate their moms for what happened to Dusk, and the fact they were born from a Disgusting and Evil Act (Rape). 😠

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Sighs that is true.

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Yeah it sucks. 😣

I feel bad for Dusk. I hope the Four Villainesses feel Regret, A LOT OF GUILT! 😤

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Maybe, if i can remind myself properly.

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Answers will be given soon!

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Judgment is waiting!!

Well it was nice to see that you have a sequel to this fic. I can't wait to see what's dusk and spike when they wake up again. See you next month or less.

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Dont worry, maybe a new chapter will be uploaded soon

It's an interesting and good start to the fic, personally I think it has a lot of potential to give it the final closure that Dusk and the rest of the girls deserve.

I find it interesting that from the beginning it was understood that the villains managed to have and raise their children until they reached a more or less adequate age to undertake the journey of meeting their father.

It should also be noted that it was well thought out that the scene of Dusk teleporting away from the Princesses, to then be alone with Goddess Faust and then appear in her tree house, occurred in a plane of space and time that did not affect the flow, as if his teleportation was never interrupted, to then be sent by the creator of everything to where he wanted to go from the beginning, giving peace to Dusk who did not know his origin, a situation that even Spike could notice that positive change in his brother.

And although the way the villains and the ponies appeared in Dusk's library was unexpected, I have to admit that I imagined the scene so clearly with everything and special effects ^^.

And it was not for less that after meeting again with those girls who made Dusk go through both physical and emotional torment, he still felt dominated by his latent fears, but what must have surprised him the most was knowing that all the abuse that suffered in the hooves and claws of the villains, he would come to fulfill the role they wanted since his change of plans to take revenge on Dusk, and they could have his children, so much so that Dusk and Spike could not help fainting at such a revelation.

Of all the villains, Nightmare Moon is the one who least Dusk should not fear him compared to the other 3, since she not only opened up sentimentally and emotionally, she also wanted to fix things with Dusk and help him to convince the other girls, I hope that whatever happens, Dusk can give Nightmare Moon another chance and not hold a grudge against her.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, but the wait will be worth it ^^.

I think this can make a very funny story.

looking forward to dusk bonding with his kids and nightmare. less so with the other 3 but dusk seems put together enough to be civil with them and at worst can voice his displesure with them and ask them to leave

This is beyond interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes