Dusk and his enforces watched without fear at the hit, before calmly turning away. He opened five portals, leading to different universes across dimensions. They would prepare his arrival by siphoning the magic, power and energy from different worlds, bringing it to him to take. The knowledge and power of each world would be added to his own.
Nightfall’s multiversal conquest was beginning and he knew that once he acquired all the magic, all the power, his true goal would be to go to the heart of it. The heart of Life, of Magic and the Source of everything itself.
No one, nothing could stop his path to achieve ultimate knowledge and power of the very universe itself.
Me: Alright, enough's enough! I do somewhat understand your reasoning of turning into this twisted dark version of yourself. ( And it's because of four certain villainesses, and Tirek. )
But, this is going too far!
It's bad enough that you destroyed your own world, then suddenly tried to invade the entire multiverse.
Now, you have the frickin audacity to break through the fourth wall, then want to attack our own world, starting in.my.HOUSE!?
Me starting to put one of my many OP suits for demon slaying and god-like being slaying purposes: Buddy, there is just some worlds that SHOULDN'T be invaded in the first place. This world especially.
Me summoning my various OP weapons for this one-sided fight: Now, it's time to give you a very painful class 101 lesson.
And it rhymes with GRIP AND MARE!
Nightfall: Wait, why those specific words? 😕
Me: Because; I'm giving you a foreshadowing hint on where I'm going to grip, then RIP and TEAR off of you first. And secondly, this action will automatically turn you into a mare~
Nightfall: What are yo------------ *Has a realization* OH NO!
Me as the Doom Slayer: Bye bye Nightfall, and hello Midnight~~~!!!!!!
11589028 Nightfall hears the Rip and Tear music slowly coming in closer and closer, followed by the distant sound of shotguns cocking and chainsaws reving "I-I-I FEAR NO ONE, Y-YOU HEAR ME!?!" Music and footsteps approach closer.
11589122 This was a typo not fixed in the prequels as auto correct took over. However at the time, I had originally wanted Tirek as Tiren, the character changed due to budget cutsauthor being lazy and not hiring editors. I will try and fix that mistake with something else along the way
So Starlight had to take a role of Kyle Reese to warn the past Dusk about the upcoming doom? Wait a minute... didn't Kyle Reese came back to the past in order to father John Conner as well? Am I thinking too deeply into this?
11590102 Sorta but choice made was always going to be asked when Tirek arrived. Starlight warning him of it, was her catalyst to choose wisely.
If you noticed, i put
Shining tried to use his magic to hold onto her but… tears fell from her as she was ripped… from this time and shot back into the vortex. It closed with a powerful clap, leaving a scent of ash and brimstone left in its wake.
There for a reason. Dusk Shine wouldn't believe her if not for either of what had just happened
11590576 So a key word there was... ripped... from the timeline. In a sense she was erased by timeline reset but Nightfall also reaching to her and stopping her. I left it ambiguous but the epilogue will answer, though im still waiting enough responds to k ow if Luna and Nightmare remain apart or together
The chapters were very entertaining, especially the unexpected appearance of Starlight.
And he warned Dusk about that fateful future, and although he failed to give the warning of his choice, it didn't take long for Dusk to know what choice he should make, despite the fact that Nightfall tempted him, dissuaded them from transcending to something else, Fausticorn interceded and gave him the choice that Dusk could choose, without his dark side continuing to torment him (I hope they get to return to the Starlight of the present timeline and that Dusk thanks him, even if she knows what he's talking about).
And now with regard to Luna and Nightmare, on the one hand I like the idea that they are one again, since both deserve that closure and can be there for both Nox and Dusk, since both feel the same feeling for the Prince, and That way there wouldn't be any problems being with him and living the experience of seeing Nox grow up like his mother, although it would be more interesting for Luna to participate and be another member of the pack (even to Eris's chagrin hahahaha).
And on the other, it would be somewhat sad for Dusk if by joining Luna and Nighmare, he would feel as if he were losing them in a certain sense, since both mares have their own personalities and existences, and by joining, they would be neither one nor the other, they would be a new mare with a personality that unites the two and would be different to some degree throughout her being (even possibly her magical power rivals Celestia's).
And one more extra, since I am the kind of person who likes to make the writer suffer, it would be interesting if at some point Dusk's pack hinted that they would like to have more children, since by now having a sufficiently spacious castle, there are many unoccupied rooms, and it would be very happy to see more of their foals running through the corridors, one more excuse to assault and milk him hahaha (and who says that some of Dusk's friends don't join for it XD).
And one more extra, since I am the kind of person who likes to make the writer suffer, it would be interesting if at some point Dusk's pack hinted that they would like to have more children, since by now having a sufficiently spacious castle, there are many unoccupied rooms, and it would be very happy to see more of their foals running through the corridors, one more excuse to assault and milk him hahaha (and who says that some of Dusk's friends don't join for it XD).
Ha! Nice, that's what he f****** gets for his ambition taking way too far, and pissing off someone that he shouldn't f*** with in the first place. There is ALWAYS a "bigger fish" in the vastness of the multiversal "ocean". You get what I'm saying?
I understand the reasoning for his fall to the dark side.
But it still didn't frickin excuse him to target everybody else that have nothing to do with his suffering.
Destroyed his entire world, then trying to take over the entire multiverse ( And f***** try to break the fourth-wall to get to the real creators ( Us. ) ) without consequences on this very arrogant stupid male-midnight sparkle wannabe looking-ass.
Anyway, I personally think that Luna and Nightmare Moon should stay separated to keep their personalities, and perks. Plus, it will be sad for Dusk that Nightmare wouldn't be the "same" ever again.
11595232 I apologize for not giving an answer regarding if Luna and Nightmare Moon should get back together, although I do like that they are both 2 different entities, if they should be one again, so they can live together with their foal and Dusk.
It will be a somewhat tense situation at first, since that choice (from my perspective), since both mares will merge to such a degree that they will be a new existence, and not that one has more control than the other when they unite, and being so , everyone who ever knew Luna and Nightmare Moon, would have to know the new mare they have, now, from the front, and out of curiosity, if they get together, do you plan to continue using only the name as a base of Luna, when they get together? , or will you combine the two names of each one to make one that symbolizes that both complement each other, or a new one?
And regarding the last thing I mentioned about Dusk, I apologize for my crazy proposal, I only commented on it because I assumed that the rest of Dusk's friends had some mixed feelings for him, something that made me understand Rarity in one of the chapters . . It seemed that she was somewhat interested in Dusk (or so she gave me to understand) and I thought that the others also felt something similar.
for some reason I thought that Tirek would give Dusk "choice without choice". That Tirek will allegedly kill Dusk's friends anyway, regardless of whether he gives up magic or not. It would be dramatic if Dusk, having given magic to save everyone, watched as Tirek, having accepted magic, killed everyone anyway. It seems to me that if at that moment Dusk heard a voice promising to give strength from dark sources in order to take revenge, then Dusk, blinded by righteous rage, would accept the power of the dark side without hesitation.
why did the cooperation of the villains with Tirek remain behind the scenes? Here the situation is almost cardinally different from the situation with Discord in Canon. I would like to see more detailed reasons and arguments so that they help each other.
P.S. Combining Luna and Nightmare Moon back into the same character looks like a bad script move in my opinion. They already go almost different ways of life and they have almost different interests and roles. The only thing they have in common is their love for Dusk. They didn't even really spend time together. Luna didn't even have contact with Nightmare Moon's son. The crack has already happened and patching it up just like it never happened sounds like script laziness. Let everything remain as it is. (or if it's really necessary to combine the characters again, then let it be like Madeline and Badeline in the game "Celeste")
After rereading this chapter I never noticed that luna and nightmare moon remerge. I know it's your story but in my opinion I prefer that nightmare moon and luna are separate entities. Remerge them quite confused me and what about nightmre moon son nox does this mean he has two mothers but in one body?. Either way the ending is link to twilight castle or should I say dusk castle now and looking forward to the epilogue and the next planned story of this fic!.
Never expected for this story to come back after finishing it. And, I'm happy that it did.
Also, I would really love it if Luna and Nightmare Moon did re-merge again, that would be very interesting and fun to see. Their merged form could be called "Lunamoon" or something similar to that. It also helps with Luna's lingering affection to Dusk Shine that was shown in the previous chapters and the prequel story.
11600843 That timeline of Tirek killing them was Nightfalls timeline. Where the choice was given but.. sticking to the script so to speak, Tirek not outright killing them would have only been as such if Dusk didnt give up his magic. I mentioned the slight cooperation from them but ultimately it failed since they had foals. I didnt bring it up but the hesitation is all it took for Tirek to take their magic away. As for luna and night, the epilogue is already made.
I think that, while it would be interesting to see nightmare/Luna accept that they are parts of the whole, I think it would be more interesting and/or make more sense for them to not fully capable of a perfect merge, with them swapping who is in control depending on the circumstance that they are in and thus her appearance changing between them to reflect that.
Life happens, the main thing is that you were still able to make the story, so all is good, so there is no need to apologize.
Else fits for Luna and Nightmare to become one again, else a good update worth the wait.
POKE!!!!!!
Nightfall: AHHH! My eyes!
Then he got punched and kicked right in the groin
Nightfall: 😫
Me: Alright, enough's enough! I do somewhat understand your reasoning of turning into this twisted dark version of yourself. ( And it's because of four certain villainesses, and Tirek. )
But, this is going too far!
It's bad enough that you destroyed your own world, then suddenly tried to invade the entire multiverse.
Now, you have the frickin audacity to break through the fourth wall, then want to attack our own world, starting in. my. HOUSE!?
Me starting to put one of my many OP suits for demon slaying and god-like being slaying purposes: Buddy, there is just some worlds that SHOULDN'T be invaded in the first place. This world especially.
Me summoning my various OP weapons for this one-sided fight: Now, it's time to give you a very painful class 101 lesson.
And it rhymes with GRIP AND MARE!
Nightfall: Wait, why those specific words? 😕
Me: Because; I'm giving you a foreshadowing hint on where I'm going to grip, then RIP and TEAR off of you first. And secondly, this action will automatically turn you into a mare~
Nightfall: What are yo------------ *Has a realization* OH NO!
Me as the Doom Slayer: Bye bye Nightfall, and hello Midnight~~~!!!!!!
Nightfall: AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
question in the prequel the 4 villainess mentioned tirek as a 'she' now it's a he just what gender is tirek in this story?.
11589028
Nightfall hears the Rip and Tear music slowly coming in closer and closer, followed by the distant sound of shotguns cocking and chainsaws reving
"I-I-I FEAR NO ONE, Y-YOU HEAR ME!?!"
Music and footsteps approach closer.
'Meep!'
11589122
This was a typo not fixed in the prequels as auto correct took over. However at the time, I had originally wanted Tirek as Tiren, the character changed due to
budget cutsauthor being lazy and not hiring editors. I will try and fix that mistake with something else along the waySo Starlight had to take a role of Kyle Reese to warn the past Dusk about the upcoming doom?
Wait a minute... didn't Kyle Reese came back to the past in order to father John Conner as well? Am I thinking too deeply into this?
11590102
Sorta but choice made was always going to be asked when Tirek arrived. Starlight warning him of it, was her catalyst to choose wisely.
If you noticed, i put
There for a reason.
Dusk Shine wouldn't believe her if not for either of what had just happened
Very nice and satisfying conclusion.
Though I've got to wonder, whatever happened to Starlight? Was that version of her erased or just sent to a happier future?
11590576
So a key word there was... ripped... from the timeline. In a sense she was erased by timeline reset but Nightfall also reaching to her and stopping her. I left it ambiguous but the epilogue will answer, though im still waiting enough responds to k ow if Luna and Nightmare remain apart or together
The chapters were very entertaining, especially the unexpected appearance of Starlight.
And he warned Dusk about that fateful future, and although he failed to give the warning of his choice, it didn't take long for Dusk to know what choice he should make, despite the fact that Nightfall tempted him, dissuaded them from transcending to something else, Fausticorn interceded and gave him the choice that Dusk could choose, without his dark side continuing to torment him (I hope they get to return to the Starlight of the present timeline and that Dusk thanks him, even if she knows what he's talking about).
And now with regard to Luna and Nightmare, on the one hand I like the idea that they are one again, since both deserve that closure and can be there for both Nox and Dusk, since both feel the same feeling for the Prince, and That way there wouldn't be any problems being with him and living the experience of seeing Nox grow up like his mother, although it would be more interesting for Luna to participate and be another member of the pack (even to Eris's chagrin hahahaha).
And on the other, it would be somewhat sad for Dusk if by joining Luna and Nighmare, he would feel as if he were losing them in a certain sense, since both mares have their own personalities and existences, and by joining, they would be neither one nor the other, they would be a new mare with a personality that unites the two and would be different to some degree throughout her being (even possibly her magical power rivals Celestia's).
And one more extra, since I am the kind of person who likes to make the writer suffer, it would be interesting if at some point Dusk's pack hinted that they would like to have more children, since by now having a sufficiently spacious castle, there are many unoccupied rooms, and it would be very happy to see more of their foals running through the corridors, one more excuse to assault and milk him hahaha (and who says that some of Dusk's friends don't join for it XD).
11592292
Oh brother.
More sexual assaults ( R*PE )!?
11589148
Ha! Nice, that's what he f****** gets for his ambition taking way too far, and pissing off someone that he shouldn't f*** with in the first place. There is ALWAYS a "bigger fish" in the vastness of the multiversal "ocean". You get what I'm saying?
I understand the reasoning for his fall to the dark side.
But it still didn't frickin excuse him to target everybody else that have nothing to do with his suffering.
Destroyed his entire world, then trying to take over the entire multiverse ( And f***** try to break the fourth-wall to get to the real creators ( Us. ) ) without consequences on this very arrogant stupid male-midnight sparkle wannabe looking-ass.
Anyway, I personally think that Luna and Nightmare Moon should stay separated to keep their personalities, and perks. Plus, it will be sad for Dusk that Nightmare wouldn't be the "same" ever again.
11595228
No lie, i had no response for this one
11595231
Stil working on that ending but might be something else
11595236
I edited my previous comment to say more against Nightfall.
11595232
I apologize for not giving an answer regarding if Luna and Nightmare Moon should get back together, although I do like that they are both 2 different entities, if they should be one again, so they can live together with their foal and Dusk.
It will be a somewhat tense situation at first, since that choice (from my perspective), since both mares will merge to such a degree that they will be a new existence, and not that one has more control than the other when they unite, and being so , everyone who ever knew Luna and Nightmare Moon, would have to know the new mare they have, now, from the front, and out of curiosity, if they get together, do you plan to continue using only the name as a base of Luna, when they get together? , or will you combine the two names of each one to make one that symbolizes that both complement each other, or a new one?
And regarding the last thing I mentioned about Dusk, I apologize for my crazy proposal, I only commented on it because I assumed that the rest of Dusk's friends had some mixed feelings for him, something that made me understand Rarity in one of the chapters . . It seemed that she was somewhat interested in Dusk (or so she gave me to understand) and I thought that the others also felt something similar.
for some reason I thought that Tirek would give Dusk "choice without choice". That Tirek will allegedly kill Dusk's friends anyway, regardless of whether he gives up magic or not. It would be dramatic if Dusk, having given magic to save everyone, watched as Tirek, having accepted magic, killed everyone anyway. It seems to me that if at that moment Dusk heard a voice promising to give strength from dark sources in order to take revenge, then Dusk, blinded by righteous rage, would accept the power of the dark side without hesitation.
why did the cooperation of the villains with Tirek remain behind the scenes? Here the situation is almost cardinally different from the situation with Discord in Canon. I would like to see more detailed reasons and arguments so that they help each other.
P.S. Combining Luna and Nightmare Moon back into the same character looks like a bad script move in my opinion. They already go almost different ways of life and they have almost different interests and roles. The only thing they have in common is their love for Dusk. They didn't even really spend time together. Luna didn't even have contact with Nightmare Moon's son. The crack has already happened and patching it up just like it never happened sounds like script laziness. Let everything remain as it is. (or if it's really necessary to combine the characters again, then let it be like Madeline and Badeline in the game "Celeste")
After rereading this chapter I never noticed that luna and nightmare moon remerge. I know it's your story but in my opinion I prefer that nightmare moon and luna are separate entities. Remerge them quite confused me and what about nightmre moon son nox does this mean he has two mothers but in one body?. Either way the ending is link to twilight castle or should I say dusk castle now and looking forward to the epilogue and the next planned story of this fic!.
11601605
They havent merged yet... but depending on the vote, it will be determined if they will or not.
Never expected for this story to come back after finishing it. And, I'm happy that it did.
Also, I would really love it if Luna and Nightmare Moon did re-merge again, that would be very interesting and fun to see. Their merged form could be called "Lunamoon" or something similar to that. It also helps with Luna's lingering affection to Dusk Shine that was shown in the previous chapters and the prequel story.
11600843
That timeline of Tirek killing them was Nightfalls timeline. Where the choice was given but.. sticking to the script so to speak, Tirek not outright killing them would have only been as such if Dusk didnt give up his magic.
I mentioned the slight cooperation from them but ultimately it failed since they had foals. I didnt bring it up but the hesitation is all it took for Tirek to take their magic away.
As for luna and night, the epilogue is already made.
I think that, while it would be interesting to see nightmare/Luna accept that they are parts of the whole, I think it would be more interesting and/or make more sense for them to not fully capable of a perfect merge, with them swapping who is in control depending on the circumstance that they are in and thus her appearance changing between them to reflect that.
This was beyond wild and had my heart pounding I'm beyond happy everyone is ok and I hope Luna and Nightmare do mirage