I feel a bit sorry for the kids with the grandparents speed running all the holidays they have miss That Must be so damn confusing, and i was sure you were going for Chrysalis first, A good miss Misdirection
11416560 You cant miss what you never knew about. Plus now in their lives, they can anticipate what will come next. As for chrysalis, that was a misdirection mostly out of the blue but also there are two queens to remember
11416807 Im a dude raised by woman his whole life. When you get raised by Twilight velvet and maybe Celestia, you tend to know what mom mood is. Two things with this though. "Mood" was meant to be "mode" so changing that now. Other thing is... i figured that with the way he grew up he may have gotten a little teased or bullied so she may have stepped in to defend him
It began like an orchestra, soft tones with flutes, piano and the like. The image slowly focused on Chrysalis from afar but a slow transcending view into the room where she was at. She tried different styles as she made herself look beautiful. Looking in the mirror, she lightly danced and swayed on her hooves, smiling as she did but the intentions unsure.
The door briefly opened, someone or somepony telling her it was almost time. She gave a gleeful nod and as the door closed, she gave a laugh. It was difficult to tell if it was giddy or evil. A flash of green and she changed into her true form, signifying her intent. Then, a heavy hit of metal instruments began...
“This day is going to be perfect, the kind of day of which I dreamed since I was small,” She gave a look at her dress with slight disgust but settled on it. Noting it was nothing she would wear, she conjured it into her frame and continued her little serenade to herself.
“Everyone will gather round, say I look stunning in my gown. What they don’t know is that I will come to rule them all!”
I don't understand why Dusk's parents did this photo shoot. Usually photographs are taken to capture a happy moment as a keepsake, but what is being done now is all fake memories. And I doubt that these photos will evoke pleasant emotions in the future, because everything that they captured is feigned.
11481106 Comedic effect, but I also wanted to reference a scenrio where a family lost their photo album in a fire and in order to recreate those lost memories they recreate those by rushing holidays and birthdays.
11482193 trying to recreate a lost photo album certainly seems really funny, but then their first acquaintance turns out and the absence of the original album loses the meaning of the joke. 🤔 Well I do not know. If I were a parent, I would probably take the kids to an amusement park, water park, bowling alley or any other entertainment venue to create really good memories with photos.
11482245 These foals are alien to a world they know nothing of. Their parents are wanted villians, how do you think others will react? Nightmare Moon is still a folklore horror story. Chrysalis and changelings are still feared or resented. Same with Eris. Silhouette is a tyrant in another part of the country. Now the foals look like their parents and the town has yet to acknowledge them.
11482311 technically, as long as society doesn't know that the villains have children, no one should notice if they hide in plain sight. Yes, before that, no one should purposefully look for them. 🤔 and disguising children, in theory, shouldn't be a lot of work. Mirage as a changeling can choose any disguise at all. (even come up with an image that is not very different from the original one by simply replacing chitin with wool.) Nox, according to the precepts, Nyx can put on a shirt by covering his wings and glasses. Screwball just needs to be in his pony form. (If she can't make her eyes look more like normal, dark sunglasses or contact lenses will do the trick.) m̶i̶n̶i̶ ̶̶S̶o̶m̶b̶r̶a̶ Umbra doesn't need to do anything at all. He looks pretty normal as it is. (according to the image in Prolog 2) :D although for the sake of appearance it would not hurt him to wear something too, because then he will stand out from the rest. And so they will be very similar to a group of children of tourists. 😉
11482716 You thought this through and I ❤ you for it! So very few know of the foals exsistence, outside the mane six, BonBon, Princesses and guards. While they are not actevly looking for them, ponies are looking for the parents and are made aware of their locations. The problem is on them, not the foals, but eventually someone will make connections. There was supposed to be a huge thing with that, but do to budget cuts, it was shortened... youll see very soon.
A family issue had arisen and sadly this was not foreseen hence delay. Be assured that it will be posted sometime this week. Sorry for any Convenience and i will clarify that in the notes of chapter published
files.everypony.ru/smiles/00/33/4cd24e.png - YAY! Update!
files.everypony.ru/smiles/75/c8/04ebb5.png - You god damn right! (but me here for the plot)
I feel a bit sorry for the kids with the grandparents speed running all the holidays they have miss That Must be so damn confusing, and i was sure you were going for Chrysalis first, A good miss Misdirection
11416560
You cant miss what you never knew about. Plus now in their lives, they can anticipate what will come next.
As for chrysalis, that was a misdirection mostly out of the blue but also there are two queens to remember
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True that now i am just looking forward to next part, I hope you have Silhouette and Nightmare introduce to the in laws
And the reason why you, a stallion, know about this is...?
11416807
Im a dude raised by woman his whole life. When you get raised by Twilight velvet and maybe Celestia, you tend to know what mom mood is.
Two things with this though. "Mood" was meant to be "mode" so changing that now.
Other thing is... i figured that with the way he grew up he may have gotten a little teased or bullied so she may have stepped in to defend him
This song was good!! I loved your version of it!!
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Thanks, took me months to try and match the the rhymes and notes!
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Well it paid off!!
I don't understand why Dusk's parents did this photo shoot. Usually photographs are taken to capture a happy moment as a keepsake, but what is being done now is all fake memories. And I doubt that these photos will evoke pleasant emotions in the future, because everything that they captured is feigned.
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Comedic effect, but I also wanted to reference a scenrio where a family lost their photo album in a fire and in order to recreate those lost memories they recreate those by rushing holidays and birthdays.
11482193
trying to recreate a lost photo album certainly seems really funny, but then their first acquaintance turns out and the absence of the original album loses the meaning of the joke. 🤔
Well I do not know. If I were a parent, I would probably take the kids to an amusement park, water park, bowling alley or any other entertainment venue to create really good memories with photos.
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These foals are alien to a world they know nothing of. Their parents are wanted villians, how do you think others will react?
Nightmare Moon is still a folklore horror story.
Chrysalis and changelings are still feared or resented.
Same with Eris.
Silhouette is a tyrant in another part of the country.
Now the foals look like their parents and the town has yet to acknowledge them.
11482311
technically, as long as society doesn't know that the villains have children, no one should notice if they hide in plain sight. Yes, before that, no one should purposefully look for them. 🤔
and disguising children, in theory, shouldn't be a lot of work.
Mirage as a changeling can choose any disguise at all. (even come up with an image that is not very different from the original one by simply replacing chitin with wool.)
Nox, according to the precepts, Nyx can put on a shirt by covering his wings and glasses.
Screwball just needs to be in his pony form. (If she can't make her eyes look more like normal, dark sunglasses or contact lenses will do the trick.)
m̶i̶n̶i̶ ̶̶S̶o̶m̶b̶r̶a̶ Umbra doesn't need to do anything at all. He looks pretty normal as it is. (according to the image in Prolog 2) :D
although for the sake of appearance it would not hurt him to wear something too, because then he will stand out from the rest. And so they will be very similar to a group of children of tourists. 😉
:3
11482716
You thought this through and I ❤ you for it!
So very few know of the foals exsistence, outside the mane six, BonBon, Princesses and guards.
While they are not actevly looking for them, ponies are looking for the parents and are made aware of their locations. The problem is on them, not the foals, but eventually someone will make connections.
There was supposed to be a huge thing with that, but do to budget cuts, it was shortened... youll see very soon.
I hope you come back to this eventually, I'm a huge sucker for genderbent Twilight making the villains bow down to his hotness!
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Its been delayed to next month where i can hopefully finish the series.
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Hey no pressure, I know some people are impatient, but I'd rather you have everything square so you can write your best!
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I shall. Hopefully its a satisfying conclusion.
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Pfft! I doubt it.
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Is it bad for me to actually rooting for the angry mob to find the four villainess, and rightfully punished them for what they'd deserved.
I thought that this was going to be updated since last week.
A family issue had arisen and sadly this was not foreseen hence delay. Be assured that it will be posted sometime this week. Sorry for any Convenience and i will clarify that in the notes of chapter published
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It's fine, no apologies are needed just was curious that's all. Hope everything pans out ok.
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Expect the story at least one of them posted today
I hope she is truly reformed.