Discord, queen Chrysalis, and king Sombra leave their animated world in search of an eaiser conquest. But as they make the jump into the nearest universe, they accidentally activate a failsafe designed to prevent trans-dimensional joyrides. As the Particle Accerelation Reality Transfer comes online, it chooses a host. A human host.
The P.A.R.T. alone holds too much power for one being alone. And that's why it's not just a device.
It's sentient. And it has quite the personality.
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An odd story so far, but an interesting one. I do hope to see more soon is all I can say at this moment.
Damn you and your tease of endings. Damn you! A decent chapter though, so like before I hope to read more soon.
DISCOOOORD! STOP SCREWING WITH THE HUMAN UNIVERSE!
This is gonna be good.
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Feel free to artistically represent the P.A.R.T. In armor form and post it.
dl.dropbox.com/u/95402669/Crynet_nanosuit.jpg
this is what I think the PART in armor form looks like, both have the humanoid shape and build to them
An interesting chapter, though I hoped that Discord would have a speaking role in this chapter.
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I like it. I was going for a less creepy version of the Borg, but this is still cool.
1837434
Sorry about that. I'll give the three evils significant dialogue soon.
1837464 it came to mind when it started talking about support pistons and I thought 'hey, Borg don't have pistons outside their bodies, but the Nanosuit has something close to pistons on the exterior' and that's how his pic came to be
EDIT: for some reason I have the Nanosuit saying 'armor mode active' in my head when the PART went to armor mode
1837586
Iiiiin-credible!
You sir(or ma'am, but I bet it's sir) are brilliant!
1838563 it's sir, and if you watch Star Trek or play one of their games you know about how the borg are semi-robotic, and if you played a Crysis game that's where I got the armor mode from
EDIT: I tend to mix and match different sci-fi games to get cool themes and/or crossovers, like Starwars/Star Trek with Battlestar Galactica/Halo
1840980
Exactly
another chapter in an unorthodox but good story
still just as good
So he looks like a less creppy Borg.
So does he look like this
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or more like this?
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1841228
He looks like (insert ideal word here).
Honestly, I have no real way of describing what he looks like.
But the 1° Basic Form full body plates are very similar to the suitcase armor in Iron Man 2. But it comes from under his skin.
I'll find and show the most helpful pictures of specific P.A.R.T. forms. I'll give labels as well.
Imagination is king!
What is this Crossover of, mlp and what
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I haven't crossed over with anything in particular. At least not on purpose. I've been building this storyline for over three years, adding components as I think of them.
more MUSIC!!!!!!!
Ahem. Inb4 feature. (Has this been featured already?)
1841947
No, that honor has not been granted to myself as of yet.
And thanks!
Discord: "Well, hello, Hungry. I'm Discord, spirit of Chaos and Disharmony- My, what lovely green eyes you have!"
Chrysalis: .... (facehoof)
DUHN-DUHN-DUH!
When pat puts on the full body armor, think
Only from inside him.
Teamwork time! Time to gain the Pink One and create their own form of mechanical chaos against the painful chaos that Discord brings! If you couldn't tell, I am amazed at this chapter and hope to see more soon!
Though, now that I have a moment to think, I do wonder if there will be any Megaman X references coming from Tom, considering he knows of one different universe it is possible that he would know of many others. Until next time!
Fus ro YAY!
very fun story.
So awesome
'process was done in ten seconds flat'
rainbow!
sorry!
THIS STORY
IT IS AMAZING
also can you show patrick in his basic form thing whatevers?
1857523. I'll consider scanning a drawn pic in....if I can get a good one.
Everypony who's been to Seattle, put your hooves it he air!
NEXR CHAPTER,NOW
Did someone just mention the PINK ONE? You fool! You have doomed us all! If you mention the PINK O.......
Did somepony call me?
.......
.......
.......
RUN!
So....its somewhat like the Green Lantern ring? Use your imagination to power it?
And most of what it consists of is porn! Alien porn! And 4chan
Uhoh. Discord has turned into Loke! And he doesn't need a powerstaff to be able to convert people to his cause!
But, good story so far. Will be interesting to see how it goes.
Btw, something that I have tought while reading this story. Patrick and his armor reminds me a lot about the anime Guyver. Any connections?
Draconequus, and BAHAHAHA!!!
MOAR
P.A.R.T. Swag.
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=related&v=Y3tJIXKiOGY]
And more swag.
If you have not see this you are not living, my friend.
[youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=eNsAnPEqfl0&feature=related]
Can't wait for Chapter 11!
1862040. It'll be a doozy!
next chapter,sombra or chrysalis?
problably going to make a story like this soon if i finish the 4th chapter of defenders and submit it.
1862085most likely Sombra, but not yet.
I'm watching doctor who for ideas. You should try it.
1860099can patrick do all that?
1862191
Well see...
Let's keep in mind that the government will be the government, if you get what I mean.
Hmmm...oh! IDEA!!!!!
Torchwood.
Freaking Torchwood.
Spoilers!
Final battle=the biggest mash-up the multi-verse has ever seen.