Just to make sure Zesty Gourmand never tries to ruin a restaurant's reputation again, Pinkie Pie invades (Okay she just said hi to the guards as she walked into) the Royal Palace with take-out from the Tasty Treat, but the Royal Chefs (at least the night shift) aren't going down without a fight against common food. Expect a brawl to the finish because if the Royal Guards won't stop her then the Royal Kitchen Staff lead by Chef Tough Cookie will be forced to face off against very scourge of their existnce, Take-Out! Sure they failed to stop the Princess's palette from being polluted by Pony Joe and his accursed doughnuts and been forced to let that Apple Farmer use their kitchen for the Wedding, but there is only one of her and over a hundred of them, it almost seems unfair.
Note: not my usual style and I prefer M rating, but the ideal just wouldn't leave me.
You know... they probably should've just let Pinkie do her thing, Once she's set on something, she'll break physics to get it.
No one likes broken physics...
7361446 But that's my favorite type of physics
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...same
Alright, I'll be blunt and list what I liked and didn't like about the story.
Likes:
El Tornado Rosa, and Pinkie going Luchadore on some bitches. (Pardon my French, I'm a sailor by heart.) The mere idea of that was brilliant.
Said Luchadore making things fly. Through walls. And the Night Guards' reactions to it all.
Dislikes:
Some grammar and sentence structural errors. Also, wall-of-texty. Paragraphs are broken apart for a reason.
Not enough showing, and it is tell-heavy.
Too short. I wanted more El Tornado Rosa, and more combat between her and the Royal Chefs (though said combat would be pretty one-sided, considering who we're talking about here).
Overall, I rate this... 6/10, because it gave me some chuckles. Could use some work, but not a total overhaul. You have earned a like from me.
I want to see the fight with applejack
You got another link for that luchador picture? That one seems to have.....hiccuped.