Breeze and Luna are having lunch at Hayburger, or at least trying to. But needless to say, things get out of hoof.
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Wonder
Sometimes I like to just sit down and do nothing. Alright fine, all the time.
Wonder
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I like this story.The food wars made me laugh.I'm surprised that no one else had review on this fantastic story.
Good story, sir!
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your
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~elkophys
This looks pretty
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6580524
Thanks for pointing out those mistakes.
They're fixed now.
Nice!
And that's how Equestria was made!
6581454
Maybe next time I'll tell you how I got my cutie mark.
I don't know if I should up vote or down vote XD
there are an equal number of things I liked and disliked
6582048
Just my personal opinion, but I think you should up vote.
6582106
Well there we go decided for me lol
6581827 Just maybe.
very silly.
I loved it
Once they use up all of the available resources, it becomes a war of attrition.
6583830
Oooh, clever.
Never thought about that.
6585416 If Twilight joined in, she should use pizza.
I like you.
6585416 loved it and i would have built a mine into another store fore more food
Posting this at the top of your story will push readers away from reading it. This told me that you don't even like your own work, so why should I spend my time reading it? You're literally shooting yourself in the foot here.
6591163
hehehe, time to hide it at the bottom.
Fun story. Lovely idea off the top of your head. Nice work /)
As for editing, that's what fandom friends are for.
played, fries
stopped
suggestion: giving. Wretched, needed
to
Within, twelve
(lovely touch, by the way) dam
<don't need that>
6591966
Thanks a tonne. Usually when I write, I don't look up from the keyboard and don't realize that I've messed up. Auto-correct gets most of the mistakes, but some of them slip through. Thanks.
6592004 Happy to help
This was really fun to read. Lol.
Really good story to read. I hope there are more stories involving Breeze
7604230
The madness shall continue on.
So hows it going with the squel to the orgainl story been a year now
7671774
Been a bit slow unfortunately. Got the basic plan down but haven't been able to write stories much recently. Had my laptop stolen a while back. Don't worry though. I haven't stopped writing. Just... Slowed down.
7672311 omg someone stole your laptop wow that sucks did you get a new one or what?
7673076
Nah, not yet. Can't afford one till I get a job.