Celestia is trying to get to sleep, but the moon keeps shining in her eyes. It has even started to affect her daily life.
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Wonder
Sometimes I like to just sit down and do nothing. Alright fine, all the time.
Wonder
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I shan't review it here, but I'll review it in a blog post
5907850
I love that word.
Shan't
It sounds so cool.
5907867 Ikr!
It was okay. Made me chuckle and for that you get a like, hehe.
Still, could use some improvements. There's quite a few tense errors and it gets a bit awkward at times, still with practice and some know how I'm sure it can be ironed out.
5908158
Do you want to do the ironing?
*snorts*
Points for originality.
Cute, short and funny.
5908359
Me in a nutshell.
Well, I'm actually average height, but you get the idea.
5908179
What, you mean editing?
I wouldn't mind doing a bit of clean up. I quite like editing. Probably best discussed in a PM though.
Well done!
And I get the feeling that, aside from the twits that compose most of the nobles, many ponies feel, "Eh, they're at it again"
However, I did notice one error that's a little distracting
but I would appreciate it if you could move the moons light away from my quarters."
You need an apostrophe on 'moon's'
Other than that, this was enjoyable
This is a good story.
I like this story.
I usually don't read stories that aren't in the featured or popular boxes, but the premise seemed original. The only complaint is a few grammar mistakes, but besides that this story is golden.
While amusing, the characters felt wooden.
5908773
Oops!
There. Now Celestia is on the balcony.
5909147
I'd like to be a tree.
Review can be found here
XD
I rate you 10/10!
Thank you Celestia for enabling my apprenticeship.
5926488
...I don't get it.
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"It had been five day since Luna had slept, and it was starting to affect her. Every time she had gone to bed, a single ray of light appeared in the sky, shining right into her eyes. There wasn't even a sun causing the light, it just appeared. She could hardly stay awake during night court anymore and had somehow agreed to take on an apprentice by accident."
5927931
Oh yeah!