Cicero, member of an alien race of Protectors, has been ripped from his planet and thrust onto Equis. Now he’ll need the help of some new equine friends to defeat an unimaginable evil that’s broken free of its prison inside of Equis.
7312390 not praise but fact that can be taken as praise, I am curious about his eyes still, perhaps he can SEE magic within something and if he say hit or cut at that point it would disable there magic.
7313040 I couldn't have just mixed up words like their or they're or there. Oh no, I had to mess up an element and double down on kindness. Thanks for the warning.
7723514 It's hard to address this concern without spoiling something so I marked it as such. Cicero's perspective becomes easier to understand in later chapters. As an alien species evaluating humans from the outside It made sense, to me, for Cicero to be a bit critical of the humans and their ways. However as he's lived amongst them I did attempt to include the good and bad parts of human civilization. With that said, this concern is useful information. Due to his peoples duty (later revealed) it's in his nature to also be open minded and fair to all species. I will make sure to keep this in mind while writing future chapters. My intentions are not to write a story full of human hate. For as far as you read and your subsequent useful input, thank you.
So he is a Mister Magoo with a Daredevil Powers?....Awesome! I Aprove! o/
Bookwells face cracked into a wry smile. “You’re welcome dear but as you're my best customer I was more so worried about my finances if you stopped shopping here.” Twilight's mouth fell open.
“Damn!” I said in awe. “That was savage Bookwell!”
This is definitely one of the best him fics on this website
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Your praise bolsters my resolve to continue writing. Thank you.
7312390 not praise but fact that can be taken as praise, I am curious about his eyes still, perhaps he can SEE magic within something and if he say hit or cut at that point it would disable there magic.
“I’ll handle this one Rarity.” Twilight chimed in. “Rarity is the element of kindness
Just a heads up.
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I couldn't have just mixed up words like their or they're or there. Oh no, I had to mess up an element and double down on kindness. Thanks for the warning.
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So i read your story and so far i really like it
My only question is that the main character can still see but his eyes are closed due to a medical problem I don't get that
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Thanks!
Also to your other point. Don't worry. All things will be explained in time.
I would probably have kept reading if you didn't throw in human hatred everywhere. Oh well.
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It's hard to address this concern without spoiling something so I marked it as such.
Cicero's perspective becomes easier to understand in later chapters. As an alien species evaluating humans from the outside It made sense, to me, for Cicero to be a bit critical of the humans and their ways. However as he's lived amongst them I did attempt to include the good and bad parts of human civilization. With that said, this concern is useful information. Due to his peoples duty (later revealed) it's in his nature to also be open minded and fair to all species. I will make sure to keep this in mind while writing future chapters. My intentions are not to write a story full of human hate. For as far as you read and your subsequent useful input, thank you.
So he is a Mister Magoo with a Daredevil Powers?....Awesome! I Aprove! o/
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