Cicero, member of an alien race of Protectors, has been ripped from his planet and thrust onto Equis. Now he’ll need the help of some new equine friends to defeat an unimaginable evil that’s broken free of its prison inside of Equis.
I....somehow I got the idea he would be Fluttershy.
Perspective: Tired Running Human
Okay now I get it, still alien but a Human as an alien and not something more rare.
Nice story so far, even if I somehow got the wrong idea about it and don't exactly got what I thought I would get, but that was my fault I guess.
Just saying, but if I could write that good as some others, I would write characters like one that actually isn't Twilight doing any experiment, or not going somewhere the others want him to go if he doesn't want to do it if you know what I mean.
Most characters, and I don't mean this story, have characters with no assertiveness.
I....somehow I got the idea he would be Fluttershy.
Okay now I get it, still alien but a Human as an alien and not something more rare.
Nice story so far, even if I somehow got the wrong idea about it and don't exactly got what I thought I would get, but that was my fault I guess.
Just saying, but if I could write that good as some others, I would write characters like one that actually isn't Twilight doing any experiment,
or not going somewhere the others want him to go if he doesn't want to do it if you know what I mean.
Most characters, and I don't mean this story, have characters with no assertiveness.