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Lunasservant1985
i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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7265582 it should be borderline and the fic is tagged mature...you can see butt from the front...but not her gentiles...if they have an issue with it i'll crop it out.
EDIT: changed it anyway, think this image is cuter and better anyway
might use it for a pic prompt for bubble berry's chapter. 
Where is the Source for the Cover art and what was the previous cover art?
7267262 I just googled spike rule 63...the original fic was barb naked from the front on a bed with her butt the most visible but it was borderline nsfw
This seems interesting but it really needs gone over for formatting errors. There are quite a lot of quotation errors and other grammar issues that make it very hard to read and nearly impossible to be immersed in. Definitely worth watching though.
7267950 thanx, i do mostly my own editing and try to keep the formatting tight but when you haven't cracked a book on writing in so long it gets to you
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Yeah, I think this would be significantly more readable if you just went through it right quick and made sure all the dialogue had properly closed off quotation, make sure you start a new paragraph if you have a new speaker (I only noticed this toward the beginning), make sure to cap your proper nouns, and go over it just one more time to make sure you used the right word.
Picking a paragraph at random I spotted two in the same sentence, but it was fairly prevalent throughout:
The first should of course be cries and, depending on what you were going for, the second should be either armoured or amorous. I think armoured fits the metaphor better, but if anything could be an amorous train it would probably be a dragon. You could also probably make a joke about Love Train by The O'Jays
Sorry I wasn't actually helpful in my first post. I was just trying to get through a backlog of fics and I felt like commenting but not actually collating any real suggestions, which was kind of shitty of me.
7269681 new chap is up, hope its not too screwed up to enjoy.
Sooo, every other Spike Harem fic, but rule 63 version.
Still a nope from me. Technically been done to death before.
Man, Barb is sexy as hell if she can give a heart attack to a middle aged stallion, turns mare bi won't out even trying, and seduce a married doctor in a few minutes. The sex scene was also hot as hell and I really like how Barb uses the heart smokes as a way to tease stallions. Redheart scenes after meeting Barb were also extremely hilarious.
7273822 thank you you're too kind
I think you mean Sweet Solaris? ;)
I know you did that on purpose (I hope.)
If you didn't, erogenous.
7286837 goddamn autocorrect!
You're missing an "o"
What? Even I see there is something wrong.
Wow, that chapter with AJ was hot. Surprised AJ had experiences with Coco and Sassy, but his time with Barb and the way he acted like a porn star was hot yet funny at the same time.
I am not yet sure if I like what you're implying.
7558315 he was reading a list of books on creatures that start with D looking for dragon.
7558357 more a joke really...a fruedian slip on AJ's part. not going to follow up on it
7558378 was hoping for a fight between Barb and Blitz over AJ
7558374 shouldn't it be "Draconiquis "?
Just asking
7558382 oh no actually it implies AJ was thinking of him while getting serviced by barb...but i think ill keep your idea in mind. also I'll fix it, that word is as random on how it's spelled as discord himself is...though in this world i think it's Eris Herself.
Well based on how the previous chapters done so far, I can't wait to see how you write Elusive, especially when Barb is the looker that she is now...
7559926 well since this is partly nased on the ep sectet of my excess rainbow dash...or shpuld i say...blitz is nezt elusive wont ne till likr the very end
Good story. Need to edit spelling and pacing
Ah, yes. The over-the-shoulder-boulder-holder. Also known as the Breast Restraining Apparatus, or BRA
Thighen? I think you meant tightened
Seriously? Noone's gonna ask about the Dremora in the shed?
Interesting take btw.
8082906 no the implication is dusk was looking at a book on dremoras but the joke is still there
Using bubbles to catch dragonflies well there's our Spyro enter the dragonfly reference
Good lord!
More!
Seriously, this was extremely well dont.
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“and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech