Wow, that chapter with AJ was hot. Surprised AJ had experiences with Coco and Sassy, but his time with Barb and the way he acted like a porn star was hot yet funny at the same time.

Blitz

I am not yet sure if I like what you're implying.

7558315 he was reading a list of books on creatures that start with D looking for dragon.

7558357 more a joke really...a fruedian slip on AJ's part. not going to follow up on it

7558378 was hoping for a fight between Barb and Blitz over AJ

7558374 shouldn't it be "Draconiquis "?
Just asking

7558382 oh no actually it implies AJ was thinking of him while getting serviced by barb...but i think ill keep your idea in mind. also I'll fix it, that word is as random on how it's spelled as discord himself is...though in this world i think it's Eris Herself.

Well based on how the previous chapters done so far, I can't wait to see how you write Elusive, especially when Barb is the looker that she is now...

7559926 well since this is partly nased on the ep sectet of my excess rainbow dash...or shpuld i say...blitz is nezt elusive wont ne till likr the very end

Good story. Need to edit spelling and pacing

8082906 no the implication is dusk was looking at a book on dremoras but the joke is still there

Good lord!

More!

Seriously, this was extremely well dont.

Monk
“and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech