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Lunasservant1985


i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

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I like how u titled the chapter, lol

7328142 i swear it wasn't intentional :twilightblush:

Nothing. I was thinking. "oh my god! A sequel with a threesome or a tie in with another one of my favorite series on your account.

Sorry for errors.

7328192 No no no no, I just thought it was funny! :pinkiehappy:
Oh, and is it just me, or does Octavia, in the pic, have big feet?

This needs a second person tag, dudebro

7328398 which is odd...given that her image is an OFFICIAL screen cap from the actual EG series.

:7328778 maybe they just didn't really care about her feet, maybe they only cared about her face and the important parts that make Octavia, Octavia. So apparently, feet don't matter. :rainbowhuh:

7328901 hey you don't think this series is too similar to the erotica girls series by harm's way do you? especially now that i have an entry in the equestria girls series? :rainbowhuh:

7329632 umm... I've never read Harms Way's Erotica Girls series, so I really can't know what u meant.:twilightblush:
I'll check it out as soon as I'm done with my Read It Later list. :pinkiehappy:

7328201 what series would that happen to be

Ok so far this is my favorite of the series, but you gotta work on those typos man they are becoming really distracting,other than that nothing else negative to say.
Also bit of a shameless self-promotion in the middle (i see what you did there:raritywink:)
This was a good one.

7335224 I'm sorry about the typos they mostly result when i write im very tired and have been working on a story for a while, but i do try to look through the stories before posting them but i often miss the ones you notice. Honestly i only hope that some readers like you can look past them if there aren't too many to make it hard to enjoy...so that aside...who was the story? like what's you like about it...and the shameless self promotion? i mean it more like a meta joke but well i guess that's what interpretation is about. :twilightsheepish:

7329632 kinda but its still good. Also did you need to refrence so many authors in one paragraph?

7335470 i only mentioned harm's way...or do you mean the stories i referenced in the actual story as a sort of meta joke?

7335729 in the story

7335738 oh, well it was the first i tried it, but i thought it'd make a funny in joke, originally it was going to a poem he wrote octi, then i scrapped that after reading a similar scene in Study session, so i changed to writer which gave me the idea to go meta

7335869 well it was funny.

7335456 Didnt have much problem with the typos i can usualy ignore them,and the story was enjoyable as a whole,the self-promo didnt bother me either,its kinda like an inside joke for people who know those stories honestly and thats a good thing.

Bravo, my friend. Well written, good dialogue, clever references to your previous stories, and the clop scene was magnificent. Also, a possible threesome with Vinyl? You have created a wonderful story and I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have in store.

Sans maybe the quivering of your lips as they inch closer

Undertale............

7391210 not intended, i never played undertale

CLIFFHANGER!!!! I'm excited for a possible next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

7569653 sequel is called hot summer cool beats the deluxe edition

Very good my friend, a very good work :pinkiehappy:

I always thought EQG Octavia was pretty hot. I think it's her design and that british accent she has.

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