i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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So is the character "you" a human? If so you might want to add the tag.
8197814 fixed thank you for that my bad
She's got an omelette in the oven, doesn't she?
Also, you forgot to use the anthro tag
You need a prereader, there are quite a few errors here.
8198313 its the galaxy i have to write these on its a lot harder to edit than a full sceen comp
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8198534 All the more reason for you to get some help with this.
Is this a self insert or an Anon in Equestria story? The tags confuse me.
8200059 still kinda getting used to them, a self insert is when it uses terms like you and a first person pov? and annon in eg is when the character has no name and is meant to be the reader?
2nd person tag needed
She is totaly pregnant
Like, totaly
not even need to read the chapter
heh
Tell me when the next chapter?
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now sorry it took a year
He's turning into a dragon. Well that kills the story for me.
Hmm interesting chapter
Great work keep it up
there are.... a lot of spelling mistakes in this chapter.
Oh, no! He's turning into Cobra Commander!
Great story But can you please continue it?
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im back...i dont know if i wil though
Alright. Just keep us posted.