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Art de Triomphe


The arguments I have within my own head are legendary.

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@ArtColter...

1. Just a friendly point-out... If you are going to use R63 Spike, by DeviantArt(ist) Siberwar for your cover image, you should Source Link the image &/or credit him for it.

2. As for the story itself, not my cup of tea for fan-fictions, but I skimmed through it nonetheless (since I stopped here for the point-out). I have to say that "Element huddle" cracked me up :rainbowlaugh: , I may have to use that if I find the right (write?) opportunity for it .

Barb bang. Now this is what I seek.

I like just how bluntly this story explains what it is, and why.
Fuck complex stories, charecter movement, anything thought provoking, the EoH gangbang Barb. No further explenation needed.
To quote Soldier:
"Now THAT is what I wanna see!"

Love rule 63 you should do another one please

I APPROVE THE CONTENT OF THIS FIC!!

This was pretty good. I give you a thumbs up sir, no two thumbs up. And a moustache :moustache:

I love these kind of stories, the one where Barb gets gangbanged!

My thoughts on each ones reaction
:applejackunsure: :rainbowderp:
:twilightoops: :pinkiegasp:
:fluttershysad: :raritystarry:

Dude, you write some damn funny one liners in there. 10/10, would (and have) absolutely thumbs up!

4555166

Wait, you can like TWICE?
Why didn't anyone tell me? :fluttershysad:

Damn that is one hardcore shit there!
Good story!

4551847
You and me both, brother. :raritywink:

4562748 I like it in my head, then I like it on the page. :derpytongue2:

4564024

Gang bangs are just delicious.

I have to say, the clop definitely was good, but the story kinda moved too quick for me. I understand the sex is entirely the point of the story, but the characters just kinda seemed too quick to accept the proposition. Of course, I guess this is just my preference; I like stories with romance and plot leading up to the sex.

Aside from my one personal issue, it's pretty good, and there simply isn't enough Spike/Barb + Mane 6 clop. Thank you very much for this. :moustache:

Barb clop you say? Well I'll be... I'm going to read this right now!

Surprise surprise, I loved it. You, sir or madam, are an excellent writer and a fine purveyor of teh pony prons.

Pretty hot, but the lack of detail kinda killed it for me.:facehoof::eeyup:

Aw the return of the why boner.
WITH A VENGEANCE!

Comment posted by jackass deleted Sep 19th, 2014
Comment posted by jackass deleted Aug 8th, 2015

Great premise, but disappointing execution. Narrative sounds like someone who's really excited about an idea but has no idea how to get it on paper is describing to me what's in their head. Conversation is crass and doesn't sound like its coming from the characters speaking.
The description of the sex isn't enticing in any way. It's basically "thing is happening" levels of detail. There's no lead up, and there's no way to instill how enticing this situation is, or how good it feels, any of that stuff.

>>Fre3doM Is the soldier from Team Fortress 2?

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Great breakdown.

Can someone explain to me what cooing is

7587099 'Cooing' is the act of making a soft sound of enjoyment, pleasure, happiness, or contentment. Think of it like making a soft "Oooh" verbalization, but softer and more intimate.That's the best way I can describe it.

7587967 oh thanks have a cookie?

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