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Here we go.
where are these tumors in my eyes from
I like very much, but I'd put a line in between these parts
Spike moaned again as he stroked her mane while he had a mini-orgasm in her mouth. She effectively sucked him dry, causing the purple dragon to purr in pleasure...
“Like that Pinkie...agh,” Mr. Cake moaned, as he felt his 3rd release occurring. He struggled to keep himself standing straight, as the pink mare below him was giving him an amazing experience.
Just so people know when it changes.
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No because it was happening at the very same moment; you notice that I used **************** to seperate particular sections if a certain amount of time passed. But it was happening only a second later while watching the scene.
5027531
Ahh, I see now. Alrighty then.
Well, that was certainly fun and enjoyable, if quite a bit odd.
And yup, Mr. and Mrs. Cake are fun freaks.
Want to read, but am wary of the Dark tag. A bit of explanation? Like some triggers?
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When you read the end, it'll make sense but you won't feel a thing~
5027662 Oh yeah.
And then there was kirin babies.
Ok so spike does know that the chance he got a mare preggers is high right? Dragon sperm is potent
5028105 Well if you read the other stories in this universe, you would know that he's been trying for a long time.
5028293 yeah ik I just like saying he gonna end up a baby daddy. I read the 1st one already
What a great read.
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5028293 And boom goes the dynamite.
5028470 it is :)
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Tits don't make the fic.
I enjoyed this. Hope Spike doesn't get sued by Mrs.Cake.
Though was she acting or was she actually being raped?
5029079 She was actually getting raped, but enjoyed it. If you've read my previous storylines, the cakes are the ultimate fetish couple.
I feel so sorry for Spike actually fucking that fat sack of ugly.
5030145 did u even see the picture image for the story!
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Just use [ hr] (no space). It's a separate scene, even if it happens with zero change in time. It's rather jarring.
I assume we'll get more mini sequels of Spike with a a different mare
5030281 Yes i did. Still stand by my statement.
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I wonder if that was worth a month of Sapphire cupcakes. It's nice to hear Spike's wings have grown.
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Just needed to know.
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If you want spoilers Roleplay rape
For bigger spoiler It was real rape, though cupcake enjoys it. Mr. Cake told spike that Mrs. Cake wanted a role play fantasy of being raped, but Mrs. Cake really didn't know or expect it.
Just like in the show spikes wings are just made up nonsense.
Hmm, I think you did pretty well!
I really enjoyed the fact that you put a lot of effort into it. It's not my favorite clopfic, but, overall, it was pretty good! 
Oh dear, that was sweet and elite.
Most excellent.
Oh god. This story man...
Firstly, the tilde (~) shouldn't be used how it is in the title of the chapter, the story, or anywhere in between. The tilde is used in a sing-song fashion. An example:
This is how it should be used. Unless the title is "Sweet niiight~" or "Give me some sugaaaar~,” then it's wrong. Also, all starting letters in titles are capitalized.
Secondly, this:"
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Ok first off, something you need to understand is that I use (~) for EVERYTHING; titles, ending a blog, talking in general. Hence it's a trait that my readers identify me with and I tend to use it occasionally whenever I feel like it. It's an addiction.
Second, because this is a sequel of my most popular story (noted), the readers themselves understand that Spike is very skeptical with the cakes because of previous events. In fact, it's referenced when he was paying for what he ordered while talking to Mr. Cake. Hence he immediately assumed cuckold-themed sex when he was asked to come to his home after hours and where Mr. Cake was going to say after hearing that his wife 'needed' him.
Now I am not going to use this as an 'excuse', but rather an explanation given that you've apparently haven't read my previous works, blogs, etc.
I really can't blame you for that because it does happen.
Now for the third part, I think that you didn't thoroughly read the story;
This explained that Mr. Cake was in Pinkie Pie's closet from the other side of the wall watching Spike rape his wife while getting blown. I am surprised you missed that...
Now for you having an issue on she reacted, I can easily say that her previous attempts to fight back seemed pointless when he easily overpowered her and given by how perverted she is (again, sequel to previous events), she easily gave in to his attacks. Now this sound cheap, but I did not want to spoil to the readers that she was getting raped, thus ruining the twist. And just because she moaned during his sexual assault in the middle, was completely neutral, not indicating that she wanted it or not. After all, our bodies do betray us in more ways than one.
However, I do respect your opinion and appreciate your honesty on how Mrs. Cake should have acted. I hope for another honest review from you in the near future~
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I went back again, I guess I missed that, and I give credit where credit's due.
or something like that.Also, I just don't wanna read through other stories just to understand this story's canon. You should make that more clearer, or fix it or something. I don't know. Your story.
Lastly, I noticed that the tilde is at the end of all your titles, but at least make an exception and leave it out of the story, or at least use it properly. I don't enjoy reading normal words in sing-song styles, and other people probably don't either.
And hey, at least you're not an asshole either!
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Well I will take note of your feedback. Thanks your honesty~
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I haven't read the story yet, but when I see "sex" and "dark" I immediately assume rape. It probably doesn't help that one of the groups this story is in is simply titled "Rape".
Edit: Now having read the story, I see what you mean by twist. It's an okay twist, but not particularly shocking knowing the habits of the Cakes from the previous story.
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But in honesty, most would assumed that she WAS in on the role-playing and the dark-side of the story could have been something else; Spike may have sexually humliated either one of them in such a matter or anything along that that crossed the line~
But really I think it's just a nice twist considering that you wouldn't think Mr. Cake would do that to his wife~
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are all 7 there or are the other five hidden?
Um...capitalizing every letter of a word to emphasize it doesn't really look all that pretty, it easily broke the flow of the story for me... perhaps bold or italics are better for that? (note: purely personal opinion speaking)
Also:
If you meant to use "terrible" there, you made it seem like "LOOK, A MISTAKE, POINT IT OUT PLEASE!" (whoops, that sounded dickish, excusez-moi... it was an interesting read, despite my above remarks)
5064745 he he he he lol I can not stop laughing
5065455 same hear
huh
NOT BAD MY FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did a reading of this fic, requested by someone on youtube.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCPFB1U-ByY
Enjoy if you can.
Woo!