• Member Since 14th Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen Nov 30th, 2022

Art de Triomphe


The arguments I have within my own head are legendary.

Comments ( 44 )

I like this story, even if Celestia was some omnipotent god pony (she isn't in this story I think... she in others, depending on the fan fiction) she still wants someone nice to talk to and to love.

Not fear her, I bet that hurts her feelings. She wants the person/pony/human/anyone else not to fear her, despite the fact she's a magical god pony who could kill them with a blink of an eye if she wanted to. But she doesn't want to, because she clearly shows compassion and mercy to those who aren't as strong as her. So, if you're a good person, you don't have anything to fear from her.

Also I just love Princess Celestia x Human.

Simply nothing better but to imagine a human tapping dat ass.

CelestiaXHuman...delicious Heresy.:rainbowwild:

Hmm, I was waiting for Luna to walk in lol. Nice story though!

I know that you already marked this story as complete but what about a sequel where Luna finds out and confesses that she was also planning on declaring her love for Guy and they decide to share?

6314920 Actually, I do already have plans for a sequel in my head. You'll have to read that when it comes out. It will be titled "Relaxing Royalty" and Luna will be in it. That's all I'm saying.

6315390 I will impatiently wait

Bucking AWESOME!!!!

When I saw it in the recent release I knew that it was going to be featured I just knew it

Well although I thought some of the lines were really fucking cheesy

"Your seed," she answered, "I need your hot man seed in my tight pony pussy. Please, I need it so bad."

:rainbowlaugh:
I still got off
so it was ok for a clopfic

Spacecowboy
Moderator

http://geomancing.deviantart.com/art/Dignity-348194417

If you wanna link the source to the original posting.

It was okay. Lots of cheese in it, but hey, Celestia.

" the only being in Equestria who doesn't treat her like some omnipotent Goddess."

Well, aside from the Queen of the Changelings, her sister, her niece, a night-omnipotent prankster, a caged centaur-demon, and probably some dragons, :pinkiecrazy:

I like it I like a lot, I will like to see more, and see him give it to Celestia good.

but what I like it more was that Celestia was human, she wasn't over confident, she wasn't busy or submissive, she was human, she was real and she act like a real lady would act on her shoes. That make her real, and make the love scene more real in turn.

I really want to see what is next in the future and see if they are going to continue loving each other, as time goes on, I mean it could be kind of nice, if Guy treat Celly to a date or had something special for her in her birthday

6316704
Lots and lots of cheese.

I feel as if I have read at least 10 stories like this and I don't know why a keep reading them. The concept is fun and all but it just seems very plain and as a reader I feel detached and not invested at all in the characters. In such a position, much of the dialog seems really cheesy.

This story needs a lot of work. Not the worse I have read by any means but the story lacks depth. As a whole I feel the story could have been better. humor was funny enough though

Luna chapter when ?

6319043 I like the way you think, sir

"Ooh," Celestia cooed, grinding back on me, lubing me up with her warm juices, "My pussy wants to feel your cock."

I'm sorry I just read Alternative Swearing, and I cant help but think this is both funny and convenient

Dan

My reading BGM:

sแด€สŸแด แด‡ ส€แด‡ษขษชษดแด€ แดแด€แด›แด‡ส€ แดษชsแด‡ส€ษชแด„แดส€แด…ษชรฆ
แด ษชแด›แด€ แด…แดœสŸแด„แด‡แด…แด แด‡แด› sแด˜แด‡s ษดแดsแด›ส€แด€ sแด€สŸแด แด‡
Aแด… แด›แด‡ แด„สŸแด€แดแด€แดแดœs แด‡xsแดœสŸแด‡s า“ษชสŸษชษช Hแด‡แด รฆ
Aแด… แด›แด‡ sแดœsแด˜ษชส€แด€แดแดœs ษขแด‡แดแด‡ษดแด›แด‡s แด‡แด› า“สŸแด‡ษดแด›แด‡s
ษชษด สœแด€แด„ สŸแด€แด„ส€ษชแดแด€ส€แดœแด แด แด€สŸสŸแด‡

แด‡ษชแด€ แด‡ส€ษขแด แด€แด…แด แดแด„แด€แด›แด€ ษดแดsแด›ส€แด€ ษชสŸสŸแดs แด›แดœแดs
แดษชsแด‡ส€ษชแด„แดส€แด…แด‡s แดแด„แดœสŸแดs แด€แด… ษดแดs แด„แดษดแด แด‡ส€แด›แด‡
แด‡แด› ษชแด‡sแดœแด ส™แด‡ษดแด‡แด…ษชแด„แด›แดœแด า“ส€แดœแด„แด›แดœแด แด แด‡ษดแด›ส€ษชs แด›แดœษช
ษดแดส™ษชs แด˜แดsแด› สœแดแด„ แด‡xsษชสŸษชแดœแด แดsแด›แด‡ษดแด…แด‡

แด แด„สŸแด‡แดแด‡ษดs แด แด˜ษชแด€ แด แด…แดœสŸแด„ษชs แด ษชส€ษขแด แดแด€ส€ษชแด€

แดส€แด€ แด˜ส€แด ษดแดส™ษชs sแด€ษดแด„แด›แด€ แด…แด‡ษช ษขแด‡ษดษชแด›ส€ษชx
แดœแด› แด…ษชษขษดษช แด‡า“า“ษชแด„ษชแด€แดแดœส€ แด˜ส€แดแดษชssษชแดษดษชส™แดœs แด„สœส€ษชsแด›ษช

แดแดษดษชแด˜แดแด›แด‡ษดs sแด‡แดแด˜ษชแด›แด‡ส€ษดแด‡ แด…แด‡แดœs วซแดœษช ษขสŸแดส€ษชแดsรฆ แด ษชส€ษขษชษดษชs แดแด€แด›ส€ษชs แดแด€ส€ษชรฆ แด„แดส€แด˜แดœs แด‡แด› แด€ษดษชแดแด€แด แดœแด› แด…ษชษขษดแดœแด า“ษชสŸษชษช แด›แดœษช สœแด€ส™ษชแด›แด€แด„แดœสŸแดœแด แด‡า“า“ษชแด„ษช แดแด‡ส€แด‡ส€แด‡แด›แดœส€ sแด˜ษชส€ษชแด›แดœ sแด€ษดแด„แด›แด แด„แดแดแด˜แด‡ส€แด€ษดแด›แด‡ แด˜ส€รฆแด˜แด€ส€แด€sแด›ษช แด…แด€ แดœแด› แด„แดœษชแดœs แด„แดแดแดแด‡แดแดส€แด€แด›ษชแดษดแด‡ สŸรฆแด›แด€แดแดœส€ แด‡ษชแดœs แด˜ษชแด€ ษชษดแด›แด‡ส€แด„แด‡ssษชแดษดแด‡ แด€ส™ ษชษดsแด›แด€ษดแด›ษชส™แดœs แดแด€สŸษชs แด‡แด› แด€ แดแดส€แด›แด‡ แด˜แด‡ส€แด˜แด‡แด›แดœแด€ สŸษชส™แด‡ส€แด‡แดแดœส€ แด˜แด‡ส€ แด‡แดœษดแด…แด‡แด แด„สœส€ษชsแด›แดœแด แด…แดแดษชษดแดœแด ษดแดsแด›ส€แดœแด

Aแดแด‡ษด

img04.deviantart.net/94b7/i/2011/194/b/b/princess_celestia_by_anadukune-d3pxsxf.jpg

Boner..... Engage!!!!

Wow im just wow im on a mind sex scene today whoo

Finally Celestia gets some <3
Commendable.

Dan

6320788

'tia has her fair share of clopfics.

OK, lots of cheese in it, but, it's Celestia, she can do whatever the buck she likes. Great story by the way!:twilightsmile:

6314936 I'm going to put this in every single celestiaXhuman clopfic that I read

It was a little pandering to the protagonist in a couple spots, kinda negating some of the feeling of serendipity which creates a more immersive read, but overall very well-written smut, especially in comparison to the other stuff that gets featured. I only point out what I see to be a flaw because this is such a great exhibition of your talent as a writer, it'd be a shame not to do what I can to help improve future work. Congrats on the feature!

6319741 As far as I am concerned, this can pretty much be related to my story because that is all I can think of. Especially with Celly ranting. "You" were the Royal Venter before Advisor and I mever hinted to the relationship between you two.

Pretty good smut, my only criticism is that Celly was a bit too into it vs Guy. If Guy was a bit more dominant throughout instead of just like the end it would be fine. From my experience, partners match up with each other pretty evenly. So if they are going at it and the girl yells "Oh fuck my pussy harder" the guy usually steps up pretty quick and does the "Oh you fucking like that?"

Sure these are generic lines but you get the point.

Some of those lines. I lol'd. I'm surprised there were no lines about cake, honestly.

Unless the universe starts trolling Celly, she also doesn't have to worry about cross-species fertility :trollestia:

burying her muzzle into the crook of my neck.

Long horn through the head situation never seems to happen as much as it should.

"Oh yes! I can feel it! Your head's flaring! Please don't hold back!"

Wait, when did he get a horse cock?

6948905 The head of a human penis can expand slightly during orgasm. A slight exaggeration on Celestia's part in an attempt to sound sexy.

"Showing you how a man fucks."

I laughed way to hard at this XD

"Ah, Celestia, I am so close!"

"Yes! Please cum, mhmm...."

"Oh shit, you're so hot and sexy and beautiful and..fuck!"

"Oh yes! I can feel it! Your head's flaring! Please don't hold back!"

"Fuck! AAHH!"

"AHHHHH!"

https://getyarn.io/yarn-clip/7aca6e7d-6719-4314-8647-7e3ad3e30133

Oddly enough, did you guys know that Celestia's VA Nicole Oliver was casted as an extra in Sausage Party? Weird, huh?

Now comfortable, and with her eyes closed, she whispered, "Goodnight, my handsome human."

I simply smiled, closed my own eyes in comfort and fatigue and whispered in return, "Goodnight, my pretty princess."

Nine months later...

8211484 Nine months later what? They can't have offspring. And even if they could, I believe it would grow by the pony 11-month gestation cycle, rather than the human 9-month.

8211541 Huh... well, I never professed to be an expert in interspecies reproductive biology. Damn it, man! I'm a writer, not a doctor!

Scarlett Blade's reading of this brought me here. I just had to read it with my own eyes. I love the relationship Guy has developed with the Princesses. I enjoyed the sex scene. Just a man and a mare trying to screw each other's brains out. Simple and to the point. Good job. I hope that follow up is still rattling around in the author's head. A quick epilogue would be nice.

"On a scale from 1 to Discord,"

I shall steal that from you.


"You would think that those morons would know better than to piss off an entity who could banish them to the moon without even having to think about it,"

A weapon of mass impression won't have the intended effect unless you actually use it, at least once. And no, Nightmare Moon doesn't count - it was obvious she'd use it against Nightmare Moon.

They're not afraid of her, because... she's given them no reason to be afraid of her. If she wants their respect, she will need to remind them why they ought to respect her.


"Hello," I smiled.

"Hello," she replied,

- and thus, I was sold.

Login or register to comment