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Daring Do rips her jeans and has to go home to repair them. But can you ever truly go home?
A poorly constructed parody of When the Levee Breaks by Cynewulf. Humanized, because ponies don't wear jeans. I mean, they could, but they generally don't. Choo Choo! All aboard the "Who cares if it doesn't make sense" train!
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7529268 did I post this on Cynewulf's Page or something because it's not finished yet?
I initially thought that the abrupt ending was intentional, which made it both extremely unsatisfying and hilarious.
This was pretty funny as is, though it feels like some of the jabs at Cyne's writing style are more applicable to his blogposts rather than to When the Levee Breaks itself.
Wow, that was anticlimactic!
The who cares if it doesn't make sense train, eh?
CHOO CHOO!
Also, question, how did you get text boxes within your story?! I just use the quote button, but I've never seen anything like those before!
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blah blah blah
works in stories and blog posts but not comments
8120539 Huh. Never knew that.
This was something alright. Enjoyable though
8123681 glad you enjoyed
why you gotta deconstruct me like this and also surpass me
also Delta airlines is actually named after the real Delta cause it started there
also also WHEN THE LEVEE BREAKS
MAMA ITS TIM TO GOOOOO
You, sir, have a strange and unusual mind!
8127180 And you have a cool backyard!
8127130 I just took my usual writing style and replaced randomness with pretension. ''Twas fun :P
Super Trampoline? What's wrong with you?
8128194 I think everything.
This was legit pretty hilarious.
Would have been funny if Ahuizotl was motivated by having his own jeans shredded once upon a time, though.
8136576 let's be honest Ahuizotl is the type of cat who would buy preshredded jeans
I have to be honest, I was kind of disappointed by this. :C
Though now I'm starting to think it's because you have finally outshined all and sundry and I cannot grasp your magnificence.
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I just ran out of steam by the end so I decided to go with a sort of shaggy dog ending