Once it was nothing more than old concrete and forgotten hallways. Then it became a haven for the fugitives of the everlasting war that raged between the different races. He was the janitor, always.
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Good story, continue.
I'm loving it. Great, original idea
Well it is rather interesting chapter, hope you can make this story wrol since is it orginal.
Many a user on this site could learn from this description. Well done.
this story is great so far!
This is a bizarre concept that I enjoy very much. Some minor mistakes here and there, but great overall!
Although I don't like war fics and dislike the idea of Sisters having a conflict even more, this just has such an unique spin to it, nicely done.
Like, seriously. Why doesn't this have more view, favs, upvotes, features and above all CHAPTERS?! Honestly this story really blew me away and believe me, im a pretty tough customer when it comes to my HiE. I see potential here. Though sadly I can also see it hasnt been updated in a year. Tis a shame really.
Okay I haven't started reading yet. But before I began I just had to say something.
"Who are you?"
"Scruffy. The janitor."
Why I do this to myself I will never know.
this is an interesting story so far.
honestly this is truly something to read.
now than questions
1 is pinkie dead?
2. where is applejack?
3 are the cmc alive or dead?
Could we please get more, this was really good.
Really really good.
Man, what a mystery story! It has been a while since I've been so excited to read and get my answers. Too bad I'll have to wait for next chapter.
I really wish this story was continued, but it doesn't seem like that will happen...
Good God, this desperately needs a continuation! Forget the Borderlands crossover, this is so much more enthralling!
This story has a great buildup! Please continue it!
CONTINUE THIS STORY DAMN YOU!!!!!
Is this story going to get an update...?
please tell me your gonna continue this!
Oh god, i love it but i am very confused on how big and what the janitors influence is on the hostel
This is certainly a unique story. Quite well done. I wonder though if it will be continued?
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Pinkie isn't....."dead" per say, but her mind has been broken for a very long time and she has become something like the little girl from F.E.A.R.
Not dead but not quite alive either.
I believe it may have something to do with her bad habit of turning up where people do not want her and the Janitor caught her where she ought not have been.
being mind raped by something far more powerful then a little gypsy magic in a little earth mare can do things to a pony
I want more chapters
Hmm. Given it was written in early 2013, I assume that there's no Fluttershy/Discord link, so (assuming the yellow pegasus in the cryochamber is Fluttershy) the Janitor isn't Discord or some variant (anti-Discord, shadow or shard of Discord, summoned/bound by Discord, etc). He's presumably also not linked to Angel. It reads more like an SCP entry than anything else...
This story has got to be continued. The world built with those first 20,000 words is amazing. I want to get to the niddy gritty of who the janitor is exactly cause my first theory during the first 2 hours of reading was that the janitor was an artificial intelligence made to maintain the complex and that there was pretty much a shit ton of him, like his main computing floor was at the near bottom of the building while he simultaneously controlled a bunch of robots cleaning the place, which would be the janitor the residence see. But now I'm not so sure. Please continue with this though.
If only this was not... Equestria, AU as it is.
I still hope this gets picked back up someday
I must say it's creepy and scary as hell.But also soooo good i hope the Story will go on.
I really do
Ma. This is a great story, though judging by the age of the comments it is safe to say it is probably dead now