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Night--Mist


Son of Princess Luna. A Bat Pony Alicorn who's small for his age.

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Let us venture into the past with Starlight Glimmer, to see a meaningful Hearths Warming each of her friends had, to show her that Hearths Warming isn't just about gifts, sweets and decorations.

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Comments ( 4 )

"HAPPY HEARTHS WARMING EVERYPONY!" Ah, MLP really makes May feel like December. :twilightblush::trollestia:

Good premise, but you need to put more variety in the text. "_______ said" is way too overused.

7217495 I'm trying, it's just hard to think of what to put in place of said and asked at the right times.

I really enjoyed this. The memory sharing spell is a nice touch, as well as each pony being able to communicate their individual thoughts. Looking forward to the next scene.

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