• Member Since 29th Sep, 2015
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DaiAtlas2016


Hi! Welcome to my "Land of Crazy Stories!" Also, my favorite shows are MLP: FiM, and Transformers Zone

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Twilight finds that she sucks at plumbing, so she called Trotelli, the industrial sized business, who took 3 hours only to admit defeat. Then Braveheart, a single earth pony plumber, came along, and got the job done in less than 10 minutes,Twilight then finds she has somewhat of affection for the "rugged and bold" earth pony plumber, as Rarity put it. Will she give in? Or stay cold?

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Comments ( 17 )

The title makes me think of Veggie Tales, I'm also getting Mario movie vibes from early on.
I'm curious to see where you take this.

That's actually what I had at the start, but I strayed a bit from it later on. :moustache:
Did you watch the Mario movie with Bob Hoskins as well? That's one of my favorites!

Why is it whenever I see the title I can't help but think Mario?

A yellow and black pegasus named Laura Latrine? I think i shall take a break from reading this for awhile. I still do like the story though.

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I guess that's what I kinda had in mind when I started this book, but a certain shift in plot took it off of that track.

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Glad you like this! :pinkiehappy:
I tried going for bathroom themed names, because they're all plumbers.....and I thought it was funny. :rainbowlaugh:

Again, I've said this on another user's story/page too, if you have more stories than followers I think Fimfiction is trying to tell you something.

Just in case you don't understand what I'm saying: statistically what you're writing isn't working, I recommend changing it.

To short and to fast... I like the idea, but it's rushing to much.

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Yeah, I know. I'm working on that, thanks for the info.

"Awww....you have some mighty cute nipples there!"

That would have been funnier... :rainbowlaugh:

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Yeah, it would have been, but everyone would never let me live it down! :scootangel:

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

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I don't know, what's your opinion? :moustache:

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