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DragonShadow


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It's just genetic for the Apple Family girls to have large breasts. Granny Smith has them, Applejack has them, and now Apple Bloom has developed hers. But once her bust comes in in full and others begin treating her differently, she realizes that perhaps it's not as much of a "gift" as she once believed.

Rated T for partial nudity and discussion of breasts. There is no sexual content in this story, the tag is strictly because Moderators demanded it.

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Comments ( 81 )

And thus is the first Tenderbloom fic on the site, and an Equestria Girls one at that.:twilightsmile:

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Is it really? I guess I haven't seen any others, but I just kind of assumed there were some. This site usually works so fast to get new pairings out there. I'm almost disappointed in the fandom.

This was very cute. Well done. But I gotta say, most of us are going to notice in the morning when we get dressed if a bra still fits or not. I don't think I've ever heard of it changing in the time it takes to shower. Still, this was very nicely done. The fears and issues we deal with here are true. Good job.

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So far in any groups related to Tender Taps or the shipping, there aren't any. Maybe you can be first to submit it to them, and gain more recognition.

Cute story i wuv it! :3

This was both funny and cute! I like it!

You don't wanna know some of the situations Rainbow Dash has told me about over the years.

Oh I think we do wanna know
Tell us

To be honest, when I first saw the description of this story I was like, "Ohhhhhh...it's gonna be one of those isn't it?" However, I've read it and the story was not bad and it's natural for people to go through experiences like this. Don't let my first impression get you down and keep up the good work on your stories!

Also, Tender Taps looks kawaii-desu in the picture.

Aw just reading the description I can tell this is going to be lovely. :twilightsmile:

Edit: That was a nice slice-of-life... do girls seriously shower together in high school? :pinkiesick:

Nice little fic! Has a teenage growing-up moral a lot of the users of this site can relate to, isn't too preachy about it (well, maybe a little--does kinda feel like an After School Special), and even has a little shipping!

The only nitpick I have, and this is an entirely subjective one: I can't personally see Apple Bloom as anything more than a B-cup. It just doesn't register in my mind. :rainbowhuh:

Awwww. Very cute fic. I have to admit I have a soft spot for coming of age stories. I wasn't sure if this was going to be something dirty or racy, but it ended up being a very realistic slice of life. Nice work!

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Depending on where you live and what school you go to, students may or may not have communal showers.

Of course, I read during my internet research for this that a lot of schools don't require you to shower at all after gym these days, which seems even more :pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

Nice story, though I think it should have a certain tag for some of the stuff in here. Just saying.

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I considered it, but anatomy and nudity do not in themselves imply that. Of course if the mods feel differently it will get changed one way or another, but I really don't feel that should be the case, personally.

7155724 Eh, maybe it's just me and our different standards maybe for what content should be rated.

So Apple Bloom is turning into a woman. Well, that was a cute way to deal with puberty.

I had a feeling a atory like this would appear considering how most stories about mature/teen anthro/human Applejack stories depict her having large boobs. ~hug

What matters is that you know it ain't true, and that the people who love you know it ain't true." Applejack took her hand comfortingly, pulling it away from her chest. "So don't you let them make you ashamed, no matter what your body looks like now or what it looks like later. Someone who talks like that ain't someone worth worryin' about. You hear me?"

"Bein' human is complicated," Applejack assured her swiftly. "Hot, ugly, tall, short, boy, girl, it don't really matter none. We all got our lives to deal with, and all of it comes with its own baggage. You don't wanna know some of the situations Rainbow Dash has told me about over the years. What matters is that you make the best of what you got, no matter what it is, and don't let anybody tell you that what you got is worth less than what they got."

This, in my opinion, is a moral that is worthy of the show itself.

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Large breasts are part of the "down-home cowgirl" archetype. It's the same reason Applejack has freckles, which are also part of that archetype.

This is my middle and high school years in a nutshell.

This was wonderful! A great slice of life piece.

Huh. I was just expecting a quick laugh, and not a moral at the end that was both fitting and meaningful. Kudos.

Awesome story. I never had this problem in real life but awesome story.

7155825 Was college better?

7155338 there is a group. It is called tenderbloom.

"Okay, thanks Applejack." Apple Bloomed opened her arms

I see what you did there. Well played. :moustache:

It was cute.

A bit cuter than my tastes usually call for, but not unpalatably saccharine.

This is so adorable!

D'aww. A good story there mate!
And its a TenderBloom story too! Don't see that much of them here in this site.

I'm surprised that this ship hasn't caught on yet. Oddly though, I feel it works better in the EG universe than the canon one.

As someone who's not only rather busty herself, but who started developing really early, I understand her pain very well actually. This was very well written.

7155897 Dunno. Just about to go to college, though!

Did you add a certain tag?:twilightoops: I read it before....

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Yes. The moderators deemed that the story required it (Which I passionately disagree with, but it's not my website). The story itself hasn't actually changed, it's the same one you read before, just with less physical descriptions.

The sex tag had me a little nervous but I gave the story a shot anyway. I'm glad I did. This was a funny and cute story.

Nice job :ajsmug:

Her eyes are on her face, idiot! Look up!

Edit: What was originally said here is in the description now, making the original comment useless and redundant. So instead, I'll just say that this is a short, sweet little story, and one with a very good lesson to remember. AJ really just lays it out like it is. Everybody has issues they have to deal with, in every size and shape.

7158044 if possible i would like a sequel for this

this fic... brings back me some memories. I understand your situation Applebloom :twilightsheepish:

Puberty is both a blessing and a curse, for some people more so than others. This is a really nice and sweet story. I love it.

Other girls are mean. Cassandra knows how to deal with bullies though.

Puberty brings back so much memories...

Poor Tender Tap. A helpless victim of teenage hormones. He's just lucky this is a western-animation based fanfic and not an anime based one, or things might have gotten a little bloody.

really interseting and fun story

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It took long enough, in my opinion! I've been waiting for Tenderbloom shipfics since the episode came out!

HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE STORIES? THEY SO FRICKIN' AMAZING . . . if you don't mind me asking.:twilightblush:

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I apologize to all women for contributing to this necessity. I can most certainly be weak-willed at times.

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Observe the world. Try to see it through the eyes of others, no matter how different from you they may seem. Everyone has a reason for the things they do and the things they believe. Observation and reason can give you the answers, as well as let you see the struggles they face.

Comment posted by Ryuga Kishatu deleted Apr 29th, 2016

Good Tenderbloom story DragonShadow:raritywink:

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