My name is Eric, Eric James Carlson if you want to be formal and this is my story of how I got sent to Equestria by the Eris, the greek God of Chaos because Discord presented her with a game but i find out that Equestria isn't the land of sunshine and puppy dogs that it is on the TV show. Now i have to figure out what I'm gonna do while I'm here and stuck in the middle of a three-sided war. Admittedly I took a few ideas from Rust and Blackwing's Chess Game of the Gods world in that outside of Equestria sucks, the gods who like to mess around with mortals and a few of the weapons used but it is a different universe. Picture isn't mine but it matches pretty well what is in my head. This is my first fanfic and I know my grammer probably isn't the best but I'm not a professional writer so be gentle. Will add characters as they appear.
Ok, let's see: Griffin, diamond dog, changling, humanoid dragon, and now another dragon. How many pieces are in this chess game?
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My good sir, you ain't seen nothing yet.
Now I have to ask the question WhiteFreak, did you get permission to do a story in their universe? Just one of those things I always ask new stories that I haven't heard discussed about in the group they made.
Anyway besides that, you did a really nice job with the chapters. The pacing is pretty good so far. I really like how you had the scene where Eris explained it all to you. When Eris sent my character there, she just socked him in the face. And now we have 4 dragons I believe in this universe, it'll be interesting to see where you go with it.
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This story isn't set in their world, I just liked the idea that the world was a terrible place outside of Equestria, it's in its own universe. i will change the discription to explain that.
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Ah ok then. That makes a lot more sense. Can't wait for more
(see's 5 likes and no dislikes)
you have my attention
(procedes to read)
awesome story faved and thumbs up
I WIELD THE ALMIGHTY FIRST!!!
..or not?
also, i love how all the gods and spirits who mess with human always send them to out of the universe in funny ways.
for example, in one story i read discord punted the main character out of the universe.
now, we have the greek goddess of discord and all that jazz herself with a baseball bat full of rusty nails.
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I never said rusty but I like your way of thinking
Dun dun DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png
LOVE THE STORY! IM FAVORITING IT!
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Hooray, I earned a
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BOLD comment
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YYYYYEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHH!
756159 my reaction to that joke
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and what is it about his name Taros that reminds me of the elder scrolls 4 oblivion?
Awsome story is awsome bro. Tracking.
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Not sure why it reminds you of oblivion I kinda just pulled it out of my ass cause it sounded cool, it may have been since I've been playing chrono trigger recently and the main baddy is Lavos and as for the joke I am almost positive no one has done it before
756459 i worked it out it reminds me of oblivion cause of the human god talos and how it was the dragn god akatosh that blessed him as a god
(i think anyway) its been a while since ive looked into elderscrolls lore
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Of course, I had total forgotten about him, it may have indeed affected my choice on the name but then again my head is a jumble of video games, anime, youtube and porn so who know where i may unconciously draw inspiration from... I will try to keep the porn out though
756520 my mind is a messed up puzzel of games movies books school exams work my little pony and a completly vivid imagenation with the ability to daydream at will..... i dont think about porn much though and yes i think we would all apreciate it if u kept the porn part of your brain out of the story
just saying 
that dragon is an ideot he assumes cause a dragon dont have an 'honor name' hes a push over? ... arwell hes gonna miss his eyes
Hmmmmm........ Magus Perceptum... I'm assuming that Magus Perceptum is when one can copy ones magic right?
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He will indeed miss his eyes and the reason he acted that way will be explained later
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You will have to wait for the next Ch. for explanation
sweat celestia i just reread this and relised i got first post......AND DIDDNT CALL IT!!!
NOOOO it might be weeks before i get another shot at first post
Wow, nice story. Can't wait to see what you'll do with it. It also seems like you guys keep popping up with stories based around Rust's original story.
He gained that snake dragon thing's acid powers? One word...MEGAMANthetyunoproject.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/mega-man-cartoon.jpg
Rather interesting. I do enjoy reading a HiE fic with the human as a dragon every now and then, though they always come in rather overpowered or childish. Personally I'd be hamming up the dragon part, acting all wise and ancient, then go hunt down a meal and eat it in front of them. Just for shits and giggles. But this one is a little quick, it would take a relatively short time to get acclimated to being a quadruped instead of a biped (you ever try walking on hands and feet? Takes a bit), flying and breathing fire would be the main obstacles in the way I would guess. After that would be learning to fighting and how to actually deal with it in combat.
Now I am wondering about how dragon warfare would happen, dragons don't seem like creatures that can gather in large groups and follow directions with them since they are traditionally depicted as solitary and very territorial. You could probably explore that, along with this Dragon Queen, this is the first Chess Game of the Gods centric fic I've read so I may be missing something. Either way, I am entertained, mission accomplished, looking forward to the next chapter.
Rather interesting. I do enjoy reading a HiE fic with the human as a dragon every now and then, though they always come in rather overpowered or childish. Personally I'd be hamming up the dragon part, acting all wise and ancient, then go hunt down a meal and eat it in front of them. Just for shits and giggles. But this one is a little quick, it would take a relatively short time to get acclimated to being a quadruped instead of a biped (you ever try walking on hands and feet? Takes a bit), flying and breathing fire would be the main obstacles in the way I would guess. After that would be learning to fighting and how to actually deal with it in combat.
Now I am wondering about how dragon warfare would happen, dragons don't seem like creatures that can gather in large groups and follow directions with them since they are traditionally depicted as solitary and very territorial. You could probably explore that, along with this Dragon Queen, this is the first Chess Game of the Gods centric fic I've read so I may be missing something. Either way, I am entertained, mission accomplished, looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh, and don't go too overboard with this magic copying/stealing ability. That way leads down the dark path of the mary sue, and we don't want that now do we? So give it some weaknesses that can be exploited in fights or otherwise. Or some limits at the very least!
Update??
pinkie pie, breaking the fourth wall on a daily bases
what!
just gonna say awesome keep it up
Good chapter
I KNEW IT
this gon be good is pretty much the only thing i can say
Update?
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I can't work that fast but i will try to get the chapers out as soon as they are finished.
Dang I just posted a new chapter and you want another already?
Magus Perceptum is too overpowered .it would be better if he had to study magic the old way
dun dun dun!
I have an idea, how about you make different groups for the dragons. the normal colors blue, purple, green, black, can be named the "common" group or whatever and the colors yellow, pink, orange, red, and shades of blue can be named the "exotics" that have more power than the commons but are more rarer, its just an idea, you dun have to add it but im just saying, you can fill in all the "ranks" if you choose my idea
edit: sorry the 'black' is in exotics
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I am indeed going to put a rank structure to how the dragons work as well as the different abilities of each as they appear.
I hint for you, if you are a fan of D&D you will understand
DIS IS GOOD!
More please?
More Chapters
DIS GON BE GUD (insert .gif here derp :p
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Aww crap I find another interesting story and it hasn't been updated in almost a year...
844442 he just knows how to do it but still needs practice to do it well
Yesssssss the Pain Train...
756668 That dragon is an idiot he assumes cause a dragon don't have an "honor name" hes a push over? ... oh well hes gonna miss his eyes...
PLZ USE PRRPR GRMR pl0x
HE LIFTS! So the real question is... Author do you even lift?
67 weeks ago the author commented and updated... Tis a sad day...
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Looking at how that comment was over a year ago, I find it pointless that you replied to it. I assure you my grammar has improved exponentially compared to what it used to be, thank you very much.