(if you you haven't read 'Echo the daimond dog' and 'Griffin the griffin' read them first, this story is based on the theories they have of what goes on in Equestria and beyond it's borders; plus, they're both great reads)
They told me i could be anything......... well, I really didn't have a choice in this situation. Normally when a human goes to Equestria, they say human or become a pony, or a least that's what usually what happens in fanfics; that's not my case. of all things I could have become, I became a Demon from the pits of Tartarus.
Chapters (7)
Keep it up.
Choas out.
Omegle? BROHOOF!
*sigh* another.... oh well time to add another to my favorites... IM A BUSY MAN I DONT HAVE TIME FOR ALL THESE AWESOME FAN FICS
Liked and favorited!
Not bad. There was one typo "My legs appeared to be bent back any appeared really muscular." I assume you meant "and" instead of "any". Also, see if you can mix up the word choices and throw in some synonyms occasionally, try not to use the same word twice in one sentence unless it's a really awesome word. Like buffoon. Liked and faved, keep up the good work.
not as appealing as the other stories, just a bit too fast paced
803491 i agree, but I'm still going to fave it to see where it goes
My brain just melted...
damn you man how dare you write an interesting story right when i actually finished reading echo well favorited and thumb up a pic would also be nice sounds kinda like a pitlord from homm5 with some changes
May metal bw whith you my friend in the writing of this epic
Omg hw ia asian hw will do bestter than that grifon fag
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i love laughing at trolls raging n hating.
MUCH OF THE YES!
He's a demon... In Ponyville... Having a cutegasm.... The epicness will now ensue. Start up the Yakity-sax.
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Ah another player to our game!
Quite lovely do tell me when are you?
Also if its after or within one week of the GGG Derpy is richer then you'd think!
Keep it up im watching...
Celt out...
So. Much. Laughing.
I can't wait to see where this goes.
So far, I like this story.
819438 Started up when he realized who she was who crashed into him.
Not the worst start I've seen. Your entrance sounds a great deal like Harmless Shenanigans(?) With Princess Luna, which is fine with me.
The demon approach is alright, fairly original (I think only Nosguy has done it Fist Full of Iron) so there's that.
Also, if you're going to be involved with Tartarus in anyway you're going to want to talk to me as I currently rule it. (Skeleton Jack)
As for what you are, you're clearly a version of this:
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Update?
Well it seems racism is at full force. Is he gonna meet Disdain?
I AM NOT A FRIKEN LIZARD
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well i dont rightly think this counts as racism. I mean by all rights "hellspawn" are what's considered a universal evil. So looking on in hatred at him would be the same as looking on in hatred at discord or the likes.
838683 Nope, they were doing that BEFORE they knew what he was.
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Cliffhanger-.-
You ponies are all racist
Ok he's a demon when are you going to make him accidently cast a spell in latin after all that is the native language of demons.
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if you saw a four wing, black scaled horn creature that you had no idea what it was wouldn't you be frightened also? and by all rights they DID no what he was they just couldn't come up with it in time.
840382 Not after it politely greeted me and asked me a question in a posh British voice.
"Oh, they seem to all be hiding in their homes from you Mr...?"
"Oh, ever so sorry. Where are my manners, allow me to introduce myself I am Malgrephor."
"Ah Mr. Malgrephor, my name is Twilight Sparkle. So what brings you to Ponyville today?"
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but that's not really what happened now is it?
anywhoo if i was in twi's position seeing something like that i'd probably run for the hills or something. It's all awesome and cool when YOU look like that, but when try and stare a devil in the eyes let's see if you have dry trousers later 
840595 Actually... the convo I posted IS how I would have responded to the scenario.
I can't wait to see what happens when Jack finds out about Malgrephor.
I can't wait to see what happens when Jack finds out about Malgrephor.
Malgrephor resisted arrest, and Twilight threw the book at him.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
As soon as I finished this chapter, a thought flew through my head: Welcome to equestrian where shit like this happens
843420 YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
isn't "the spice must flow" from Dune? i didn't think that knowledge was THAT uncommon...
Much fun is present. A typo “Quiet, all of you! You can relax, were here."
...go on
This story requires more story! You should really work on that problem right there. Get that cleared up and it would be much better!
Of course they do, just ask The Good-Feathers.
Silly author, demons don't dream: You need a soul in order to do that.
Great (and funny) chapter by the way.
He be Trollin the guards.
Chaos out.
Neat.
When is the next one coming?
Oh yay!
It Truly is a joyous occasion that this has updated.
Thankfully this explained why Mally was attacked like he was ('part from being hideous) by the mean ponies and their judgement. If it was already explained...then i probaly need to do a re-read to refresh my memory of the story
Nice chapter right there ^^
we need to make this an entirely different chess game of the gods universe I for one would read the shit outta those stories
Gary Stu? yep Gary Stu... still love him though nice exposition