Celestia has discovered that something much stronger than her is coming to Equestria. Luna discovers that this force was the same one that helped her see Snowdrop during the night she wished to see her one last time. Meanwhile, Pinkie takes away all of Fluttershy's animal friends, causing her to fall under extreme depression and loneliness. But after she prays to God for help, she gets the shock of her life when an alien, sent by God, appears and offers to help. Twilight then pitches in, wanting to also help Fluttershy, help hide and protect the alien, and learn about life on other planets. As Bunny Katsuma settles in and starts to speak about her life and her beliefs, they have to watch thier backs as Pinkie tries to catch and, maybe, even kill Bunny. P.S credits about the dream from Luna and Snowdrop goes to MariusIoannesP for their story "Snowy Night"
This got me...why would the element of laughter do something so cruel as too take away the element of laughter's animals? Even if they were suspected to be the reason of her timidness.
Good Work, there are some things I didn't agree with but I can hope it gets better, otherwise good story! I hope everything works out, your doing good!
7103558 Hazel: Gee, thanks TwiRaptor, it's nice to hear a comment
Hester: You can bet we will make this get better as we progress, though we're still noobs
7103558 Hazel: Gee, thanks, TwiRaptor. It's nice to hear a comment
Hester: You can bet we will make this better as we progress
Hazel: Hester, you're adorable when you get all confident like that
Hester: That's our dynamic! I'm outgoing and you have stage fright
Hazel: Don't ask about why we talk this way, we get like this almost all the time
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That's just from the description
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We decided to use her because she gets a little more suspicious than the others at times. (looks to Hester) Hester's idea
Hazel: What?
Hester: And I choose the root of the problems in the story too
There are no spelling errors I can see though from what I've seen celestia being all "no one can be stronger than me" seems a bit out of character is there an explanation for this later on?
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I don't know. Maybe we did when we made that, either Hester or I. Now, I've forgotten it. And Hester just changes topic. I've simply started to think we made that on a phase and when we were inexperienced